Joe & Timmy "The Moving"

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Status : Reject
Condition : Poor
Review : 1

Note : The ESC button bugged, it just switch off the cinematic mode and yet the cinematic still goes on. Not forget to mention the way the camera movement as well.

Apart from that, the screaming are not necessary to be add. Along with lot's of grammar and typo error on it. I do not mind grammar error, but typo error ?

The quality of this resources seems to be at unacceptable level and contain bug as well.

Sources reject.

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[Amigurumi]

Hehe, nice cinematic. Very short! I took a little of my time to create a review for your cin.:

Pro-points
[+] it has humor
[+] you don't see much of the terrain, but what I've seen was good
[+] liked the idea with the demon, but he's a bit out of place

Bad-points
[-] use after each dot the spacebar
[-] the demon is out of place
[-] when the cinematic ends, use the action 'Defeat/Victory', with skip dialog and scorescreen
[-] very short cinematic
[-] add walls or anything to the door, it stands lonely, and everybody can walk past the door

Overall a very short cinematic, I'll give it a 2.5/5

Amigurumi