I need to know if this translation is ok.

[Nocturne]

Hello!
Here I'm again, in order that someone help me to check if the translation of some sentences they are correct.
These are the last sentences that I need to check, and I could release a beta version of my map.

I leave all here, if someone finds some mistake, please let me know, and tell me how is.

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Mirror Random
The teams will be randomized according to the heroes chosen by both sides and corresponding players given the same hero.
Requires that both teams have the same number of players.
Requires Alliance Mode enabled.

All Random
Players receive a random hero corresponding to the Gametype selected.

All Pick
Everyone may pick heroes from any tavern corresponding to the Gametype selected.

Anti-Backdoor
This modes requires that all enemies structures have to be destroyed before to destroy the enemy main house.
-Simple: All enemies structures have to be destroyed in any order for that the enemy main house become vulnerable.
-Advance: The structures become vulnerable as others are destroyed.
Note: The towers built by peons, are excluded from these anti-backdoor modes.



-creeps
Shows you the number of enemy creeps killed.

-showgold
Shows you the gold that you won killing heroes.

-kick
Displays a list of all the players that you can vote to be kicked out of the game. It's need at least 50% of votes to be kicked.

-sm
Short Mode. Make that all the Heros gain more experience from future kills.

-usm
Ultra Short Mode. Make that all the Heros gain many more experience from future kills.

-th
Turn on the Tome Hero mode. This mode create a random tome of Agility, Inteligence or Strenght, in the location of a dying hero.

-tx
Turn on the Tome Extreme mode. This mode create a random tome of Agility, Inteligence or Strength in the location of a dying hero, and sometimes in the location of a dying creep.


Various ideas are credited to Pompin. He also helped me with the creation of several triggers, including the vote kick system.
Thanks to all the community of 3dgames.com.ar that help me in one or another way to develop my map, but specially to: Pepe, DestroMass and Lulo.

This map was written from the Hero Siege 1.4b by konejito.

And Thanks you for playing Hero Siege 1.4b!

Conjures a pillar of fire which damages ground units in a target area over 3 seconds.

Creates a shield that absorbs damage by using the BeastMaster's mana. 1 Point of mana is aboserbed per 4 Hit Point Damage.
Level 1 - 4 Points of Mana, 10% Damage absorbed.

Activates a shield that absorbs 10% damage. 1 Point of mana is aboserbed per 4 Hit Point Damage.

Reduce 7 of armor to nearby enemy units.

An aura that gives friendly nearby units a damage shield, which returns a 10 % of a melee attacker's damage back to it.

Increases the attack damage of the Hero by +50. Also increase the Hero Attributes.

Increases the attack damage of the Hero by +75 and gives a 5% chance that an attack will stun an opponent for 2 seconds.

Calls down waves of freezing ice shards that damage enemy units in a target area.

Reduces Magic damage dealt to the Hero by 20%.

Special armor to reduce the magic damage.

The Dark Minion has Spell Immunity and lasts <ANbs,DataC1> seconds.


-showgold
Shows you the gold that you won killing heroes.

SutinG has received a majority of kick votes and it was kicked from the game.

This is a beta testing version, and it only can be host it by Official Beta Testers.

You're not a Official Tester.

You have won 200 gold killing enemy heros.

Summons 2 immobile serpentine ward to attack the Shadow Hunter's enemies. The ward has 70 hit points, is magic immune, and deals 11 - 13 damage.




This is for show it in the multiboard, I don't know if this is Ok:

For example:

SutinG(left)
If the player left the game.

SutinG(kick??? r what???)
If the player was kicked.


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That is't. The words marked in bold, mean that my doubt takes root in this specific word, and not in the whole sentence. I did it this way to save time you.

The sentences marked in bold in its entirety, they mean that I'm not sure if are well or not.

Generally they confuse me very much if a verb like "Reduce" goes S ultimately or not, or if Hero's plural is Heros or Heroes.

THANKS IN ADVANCE!

 

[Ciebron]

Mirror Random

this dont seems like good grammar too me

-usm
Ultra Short Mode. Make that all the Heros gain many more experience from future kills.

Ultra Short Mode. Make that all the Heros gain much more experience from future kills.

 

[Nocturne]

Mirror Random

this dont seems like good grammar too me

Thanks I will change it. What do you suggest for that?

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And I need someone to check if these sentences are fine. Please. My map is already finish it. =)

 

[SanKakU]

i don't understand mirror random mode. randomizing teams is fine but who gets to pick the hero if the heroes are mirrored? is this a mode where every hero on team 1 is the same and it has to be voted for? that would be weird, and lame in my opinion. if it's that if team 1 has blade master death knight and archmage then team 2 has those heroes too, that's what i expect. but i don't know how you make it who picks what hero. if you make the heroes be random though then no one has to pick instead of another.

"Reduce 7 of armor to nearby enemy units." should be "Reduces armor of nearby enemy units by 7."

"Increases the attack damage of the Hero by +50. Also increase the Hero Attributes."
should be "Increases the attack damage of the Hero by 50. Also increases the Hero's Attributes." also, you are leaving out what the attributes are and what ammount the increase(s) is(are). Also, you can put "Attack damage +50." or "Hero attack damage +50." instead of "Increases the attack damage of the Hero by 50."

"Displays a list of all the players that you can vote to be kicked out of the game. It's need at least 50% of votes to be kicked." should be "Displays a vote list of all the players that can be kicked out of the game. A player needs at least half of all players' votes against him to be kicked."

that's all i have time to fix at this time.

also, one more, just because:
Ultra Short Mode. Make that all the Heros gain much more experience from future kills.

this one should be:
Ultra Short Mode. Makes all Heroes gain much more experience.

the part "from future kills" is just an editor phrase that doesn't belong in a game.