Human

This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
Create by Randomall

New races Scarlet Crusade,Dark Horde,Blood Elves,Nature
Dark Horde are more powerfull then all races.

Credit Frankster,67Chrome and blizzard Entertaiment.

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HUMAN (Map)

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Moderator: -Kobas- Contact: Visitor Message / Private Message! Date: 23-Sep-13 (19:24:17)Critical Errors:Map presentation is poor or missing. Map interface and overall graphics are of low quality. No 'work in progress' submissions, please use The...

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Moderator: -Kobas-
Contact: Visitor Message / Private Message!
Date: 23-Sep-13 (19:24:17)
Critical Errors:
Map presentation is poor or missing.
Map interface and overall graphics are of low quality.
No 'work in progress' submissions, please use The Map Development Section for unfinished maps.
Your Map has no re-playability features such as game modes or different difficulties.
Your Map has low quality terrain.
Everything about your map has already been seen and was often better created.
Your map misses DIS(BTN/PAS) icons, model textures or interface graphics in general.
You must give proper credits to people who created resources you used.
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Personal Comment:
Review
Map Status: Rejected
(1/5) Unacceptable
 
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I highly suggest you to go to the Tutorials Section and please read how to make a melee map or even an altered one by searching those because this just looks very incomplete and your audience is not interested to play it due to the poor descriptions. Think of your description as your advertisement at a business that will make your work interest your audience. Put some effort on describing all the necessary things to know about your map.

Also, judging merely by the minimap, the terrain is not that appealing for there is not quite variation to see.

I really suggest work more on this and submit later :)

 
The trees are in perfect circles. This looks unnatural. The terrain looks really flat and empty. Please review other maps and see the standard of quality expected for approval. Also, having a description is not optional, it is required. Two lines is not enough.

See Map Submission Rules
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Map Discription Templates
Beginner's Guide to Map Making
Text Colors
Advanced Terraining
Hidden Material
Weapon Attachment
Map Preview Screen
Things GUI users should know
Polishing Your Game
Custom UIs
JASS code list
 
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Map Reviewer: -Kobas-
Map Name: HUMAN
Map Author: Created by James ; Uploaded by: Randomall


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Originality

We have already seen such maps over and over again.
There is nothing unique about it.


Score: 0/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!

Presentation

Your map presentation is horrible.
Map name is big fail.
Description is very very poor.


Score: 0/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!

Design

Even ingame there are huge number of errors.
No Loading Screen, no quest log, no any kind of hint system.
Did I mentioned missing DISBTN icons?


Score: 0/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!

Terrain

Plain and empty.
If we ignore trees that are there just for resource,
I don't see any other doodads.


Score: 0/100
Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection!

Object Data

You just imported like 20 different models that do nothing.
Well at least you increased map size.


Score: 0/100

Gameplay

Isn't worth checking.

Score: 0/100

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Site Rules
Map still in development? Make a thread in the Map Development Section for feedback.
Need help with triggers/memory leaks? Make a thread in the Triggers & Scripts Section.
Got any World Editor related questions? Make a thread in the World Editor Help Zone Section.
Got any Requests (Terrain, resources, spells, systems, loading screens...)? Make a thread in the Requests Section.
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Final Score: 0.000/100
1/5 Vote for Rejection

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