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House

Submitted by fargs
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
This is my first skin. go hard on me i need to learn how to do it right! lol, yeah give me some feedback..

Keywords:
home, house, roof, building, farm
Contents

House (Texture)

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20:02, 6th Sep 2008 Hawkwing: [Rejected] Not enough freehand.
  1. 20:02, 6th Sep 2008
    Hawkwing:
    [Rejected]
    Not enough freehand.
     
  2. Shamanruler

    Shamanruler

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    impressive for a first skin!
    most good
     
  3. Ki

    Ki

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    This is excellent work, especially for a first skin. Only thing you might want to consider changing is the team color, but honestly I don't know what else you would want to put it with because everything looks so good with its color. But I guess that will work fine. This is great.
     
  4. Afronight_76

    Afronight_76

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    yay a newb that doesnt act like a n00b! maybe there is hop for this site. as for the skin, the theme fits well, but the reflection on the window seems a bit out of place. the roof patter could use a bit more defining as it looks more like plaid that tiling.
     
  5. fargs

    fargs

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    dude yeah, i want to know what i am doing wrong
    u know? you wil never learn if u don't ask.. lol and i will work in the future to try to define the tile on the roof thnx.
     
  6. migB

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    You should alphashade the team-coloured section.
    It's too clear compared to the rest of the skin.
    The roof should be sharper, more defined.
    The pipe are a bit weird.

    But real good.
     
  7. King_Ryan

    King_Ryan

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    Path is: Buildings\Human\Farm\House.blp