This is "Hired 4 War", by mr.gnome.
It is an AoS, slightly more original than the others, in the aspect that you don't simply buy a hero, but you also have units available for hiring, who can be upgraded on their damage, armor, attack speed and hitpoints.
You select a hero, and wait for the gates to open (or rather, to destroy themselves).
The first thing you notice are the heroes. There is next to no customization on the heroes, and those that are custom possess only 1 or 2 custom abilities, being the rest of their ability set filled by ordinary Wc3 spells.
Since the game tends to focus more on creeps than heroes, it is understandable, but in that case, I'd have ruled out the custom heroes and abilities, and stick to the standard ones.
After choosing a hero, there is a magical cage that sells potions which can heal up to 10.000 HP with only 200 gold. Considering you get like, 2 gold a second, let alone the gold you get from creeping, isn't this a bit too much?
Next, the terrain. Blizzard cliffs used to form a wall, no elevation, no ground texture variation, volcanoes in the middle of nothing... what else needs to be said?
Last, but not least, the packaging (map presentation). You did not insert a description on the map itself, and your description here on the Hive is very poor too. No in-depth describing of what the map is about, no screenshots, wrong types selected...
I believe it is pretty easy to figure out this map's being Rejected. My rating's 1/5 (Unacceptable).
Approved
