it has potentional, the crown thingie could look really good if it actually looked like metal instead of cardboard, the shape of it is really good.
the texture of his skin is simply EEW. its ugly and smudgy, looks like hes really sick or something...
also, whats with the beady eyes? is he the hamster king or someshit like that?
the pants could look good, i like the colors, but the stitches or whatever on the side dont look okay becouse a lck of texturing and shading has been done there.
also, his weapons look like cardboard as well. you need some metal-shading-practice.