Haiku Poems In Da Hause!

[Ralle]

OK I would like to see how good you are at making poems. The form is called 5,7,5 syllable (heiku). So first a sentence with 5 syllables and then 7 and then 5.

I start:
The Taurens stomps
Mashed bodies on ground
The Horde Power!

Not that good, try it for yourself!

(this is not a haiku)

 

[asasin850]

Haiku really sucks
Oh does it ever so suck
It sucks oh so bad



There, I insulted haiku using a haiku

 

[Ralle]

Give it a try
You won't die to try
Post a haiku!

(this is not a haiku)

 

[Healingpoison]

The World turns once
The last time the world turns
The end comes near

Is that right?

(this is not a haiku)

 

[Ralle]

sounds cool and is right!

 

[Healingpoison]

Does it have to rhyme?
I really wonder, do tell
I dont think so

(this is not a haiku, very close tho you just need one more syllabyle on the last stanza)

 

[asasin850]

This is really lame
John Doughtree says its so lame
As does Asasin eight fifty




asasin is only 1 sylabble cas i made it up and its not a real word so

(this is not a haiku and that word has three distinctive syllabyles. Your last stanza has eight syllabyles.)

 

[Bob27]

I really suck
at making up stuff
like these poems

(this is not a haiku)

 

[asasin850]

We can really tell
You really really do suck!
Suck suck suck suck suck

 

[Ralle]

assasin that was 10 in the middle line!

 

[asasin850]

You Real-ly Real-ly Do Suck
1 2 3 4 5 6 7


Learn to read &/or Count

 

[Healingpoison]

Oh come on now please
Let's be polite to others
Really, come on now

(Other than a spelling and a single grammatical error you have done the best so far.)

 

[v3ck]

Marine walks through trees
Lictor awaits in darkness
suddenly he's dead

 

[Malufa]

First of all sillies
It is really spelled 'haiku'
If one is proper

The second thing dudes
Is how simple they can be
If they have no point

Now try if you wish
To try rhyming with a fish
Or even a dish

 

[v3ck]

"The second thing," dude?
Can't you count the syllables?
Malufa's lost it.

(Yeah, I forgot to write dudes, thank you for pointing that out to me.)

 

[leetniller]

a bird can fly
a man can die
but i live forever :?

 

[Malufa]

First off, you were short a sylabyle on each, secondly it goes:
5
7
5

 

[Bob27]

Take me down (3)
to the paradise city (Good enough)
where the grass (3 again)

is green and (3 yet again)
the girls are pretty (5 this time, needs 7)
Take me home (3 again, it needs to be 5)

 

[Malufa]

Guys, seriously, please write haikus properly. Rasmus told you how to in his first post and I have pointed it out many times since then, so I know the knowledge is out there. Haikus are a very serious form of art and I am starting to get pissed off at the lack of respect for them.

 

[Bob27]

lol thats not really a poem thats just some lyrics i got from a song.

 

[Malufa]

lol thats not really a poem thats just some lyrics i got from a song.

Then why did you type
The lyrics in this one place
For just haiku poems?

 

[Bob27]

Well if you want to
know I really suck at making these (8 )
poems I really do k (6)

 

[v3ck]

Please stop posting crap
I don't want to see more junk
Those are not Haiku

 

[Malufa]

That is what I say
Yet they continue to write
And do not change them.