Goku vs Vegeta

[Moderator]

07:23, 25th Nov 2012
Orcnet: rejected because it lacks informative description

 

[DivineLight]

Please, Try it first.. I guarantee it would working. But please don't stole my models, 'cause it is unprotected.

 

[Tal'Rarity]

Well I decided to give you a straight forward Review.

Use of data - 3/5 ( Not bad )
Timing of dialog - 2/5 ( It was a bit slow and spelling errors )
The cinematic itself - 2/5 ( There were a few parts I disliked )
Total Mark - 7/15 (2/5)

Explaination of dislikes ;
Goku should have been knocked into the rock behind him by the kick at a faster speed too.
The kamehameha's were too basic and not interesting at all as well could of used an effect for charging up.
The dialog was plain, and slow.

Stuff I did like ;
Super Saiyan Speed was nicely done.
The effects of some stuff weren't bad.
At the end with the char laying on the ground out of breath was cool.

Jist ; Could of been done better.

 

[DivineLight]

Explaination of dislikes ;
Goku should have been knocked into the rock behind him by the kick at a faster speed too.
The kamehameha's were too basic and not interesting at all as well could of used an effect for charging up.
The dialog was plain, and slow.

Ok, I will try to fix it but i am not good on it, i will try to find someone to create the good kamehameha .

Stuff I did like ;
Super Saiyan Speed was nicely done.
The effects of some stuff weren't bad.
At the end with the char laying on the ground out of breath was cool.

Jist ; Could of been done better.

Thx, the char laying on the ground out of breath is a stand animation of vegeta.. because he doesn't has a dead animation, i trying to create vegeta dummy with lying position, that's all. what effect is weren't bad?

Goku should have been knocked into the rock behind him by the kick at a faster speed too.

that is about after Goku and Vegeta is fighting with higher speed. they stop for a minute for taking a breath, but vegeta get a chance to launch the counter attack.. that's all? i have changed it?

 

[DivineLight]

can i reupload this when i fix things?