Well let see...
Things that I like:
1st - Idea is so great!
2nd - Game Interface (colored text, icons, command buttons etc etc)
3th - Units Description
4th - Quest Log
5th - Imported models and skins
Things that I don't like:
1st - No Loading Screen (custom)
2nd - Map Description can be better (add screenshots)
3th - Gnoll leader selection system, that book looks bad -.-
4th - Terrain is so empty
5th - You can build shipyard at middle of island -.- (use Naga building setup, shallow water)
6th - No hints ingame, how to play game, what to build first etc etc
7th - Some abilities looks like passive (poison for assassin unit) in research form?
8th - Buildings have small pathing ground!
Word or 2 to Author:
* Map looks great and it is funny to play but try to add more races!
* Buildings have small pathing ground (use Lumber Mill)
* Terrain need to be upgraded (maybe you can add ruined ancient town at middle with fountain of Life that regenerate hp, maybe add armor etc etc, so players fight for it or something)!
*Some icons can be imported and changed!
*Camera options can be made in different way (player write:
-cam_xx (xx is number from 10 to 99 for example))!
*Add items (each unit has hero inventory, units can buy, you can change that to learn, items that will give abilities like evasion, bash, critical, cleaving attack etc etc)
* Add experience system to units, after each kill unit will have increased dmg, armor, life, attack speed, etc etc, each unit can increase different attribute, also each race can increase different attribute, some mana other life etc!
There is so many ideas but I leave it to you.
Because I can't check your triggers and work in WE (good for you

) I will rate this map with 2.5/5 (mark will be 3/5 then).
3/5 Vote for Approval
+Rep for some rally good things like descriptions, some new ideas and nice gameplay!