Ghost Island

[Moderator]

16:15, 13th Sep 2009
ap0calypse: Rejected

Well, do I still need to say why?
It's good that you try out mapping, but don't upload maps until you are good at it

 

[AIagremm]

Dude, I dont understand your description. It looks like talk of hyperactive 3-year old boy.
And the map seems to be bad from the looks of it.

 

[fancy]

Fail
I played the map.
It's bland, easy, and he sais that we will die?!
Edit:I'm actually playing it :C

 

[VampireofBlood]

pretty much failure, you made this map in 5 minutes; if you are a total beginner maybe in 20, but there is still the fact that the description lacks and the map sucks.
Sorry but vote for rejection.

 

[fancy]

Man...
It doesn't even have an end.
Here is my easy review:

This map does have some potential.

For now, I don't see any good things.
This is what needs to be improved:
The description: I don't understand a thing.
The terrain: You could'eve made the island more lush, while adding some creepynes as you go deeper.
The triggering: Make some for bosses, some respawns maybe, and make a trigger to make the game end after you killed preety much everything.
Overall score: 1/5
Vote for reject.

+rep if I helped.

 

[takakenji]

please stop making these horrible maps unless you improve a lot and put much more effort into it. also, learn english if its not your language or atleast try to get a legible, non hyperactive 12 year old sounding description.

 

[Vampiro320]

I kind of like these stupid little made in 5 minutes. People spend to much time trying to make things good. It's fun to try something small and simple for once.
We all were terrible at making maps at the start. Maybe he was fealing optimistic at the time,. it's probably one of his first maps, don't tear down his confidence.

 

[Aesthetics]

I kind of like these stupid little made in 5 minutes. People spend to much time trying to make things good. It's fun to try something small and simple for once.
We all were terrible at making maps at the start. Maybe he was fealing optimistic at the time,. it's probably one of his first maps, don't tear down his confidence.

I agree with that, we were all noobs once [except me (just kidding)].

Will test and review soon.

 

[takakenji]

except i didn't release all my shit maps with 500 knights spawned and 2000 random hostiles with a red and blue base when i was anoob

 

[Aesthetics]

[+] None.

[?] Custom Models
[?] Loading Screen and Preview

[-] Over-sized considering there's no triggers
[-] As mentioned above, no triggers at all
[-] No sense of direction or storyline
[-] Horribad description and packaging
[-] Fun? Not at all. Kill, get books, raise skills, repeat.
[-] Loading Screen has nothing to do with what your map is about (don't even know what your map is about)
[-] Original model/icon authors missing

Rating: 1/5

Voted for...

Rejection.

Final Notes: Please, read up on the nice tutorials we have around here and don't flame people for adding comments.

Shut up asshole!!

 

[AIagremm]

Yeap he flamed me with those exact words. I reported that.
His intolerance must be punished, because Hive is, and will be friendly community, which doesnt need members who insult others, and post maps that will not be accepted, by the rules.

 

[takakenji]

not only is he a bad mapmaker, he's immature. How great. Or, he's just 12 with no actual understanding of WE.

 

[AIagremm]

He's 13. If he doesnt lie about his true age in his profile.

 

[Thick_Armor]

13 year olds should atleast be able to string together a proper sentence with no gramatical errors... Or a system full of sugar.

 

[takakenji]

yeah, i know a 7th grader who knows c++ AND jass, spells correctly, and is actually mature.

 

[NoAmmoSrry]

I know the cookie monster. BUM BUM BUUUUUUUUMMMM!!


Voting for rejection. If you don't know English, there is Google translator. If you do know English I would recommend seeking help, as in your a lunatic you need to go to the lunny bin.

 

[fancy]

I'm also entering 7th grade tomorow

 

[Ironside]

Well if he's not english i won't agree that by 13 he has to write a proper description... i'm 15 and from Slovenia, and my english is still quite bad... But yes I agree, he must not upload this bad maps to hive, we have epicwar.com for that...