Ghost Ship Island

[redscores]

This is a Ghost Ship laying at a lost Island.

Uses UTM.

Screenshot can now be found in my showcase thread.

 

[Xzife_TD01]

It looks good, but i think you shouldve continued with the bright white fog all the way into the background. The way you have it now, the boat looks like its floating in the sky.

 

[redscores]

That "Background" is the sky i continued all the way. The Sky is foggy, so it looks a bit familiar.^^

 

[Belgarath]

I see what you've done here, I'd make the camera angle slightly higher so you're looking at the ship at an equal angle. Then maybe put rock spires behind the ship.

 

[Gilles]

Don't like the bright light. Tone that done a ton.

 

[redscores]

It is no light, it is fog, and in ghost ship movies its always like that, and i cannot tone it down, because the fog is so thick, i tried to make as less as possible of those fogs. It is the Eerie Fog from UTM.

 

[Celaquil]

It looks like a ripoff my wreckage pic
But i like it, you got some skills there man.

 

[Master334]

This picture is fairly good for a begginer... and even tho begginers think that angle is wonderfull.... it isnt. The best angl for a main doodad would have to be head on or side on, this is worm view. Sure it looks cool... but its not very profesional.

Having less fog would make this less.... HEAVEN. right now its like COME TOWARDS THE LIGHT.
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Best to remove all fog and put a new, thinner layer in.

Be sure to choose a bit better angle too... this is kind of bad.

~Master334

 

[redscores]

Eh, and you know that if a ghost ship appears a thick fog is coming up from the ground and covers the ship, a movie was the basic for this picture.

And a thinner fog wouldn't make it scary looking, and the normal weather fog looks lame.

And just a tip, i have never seen any real terrain of you master, so don't speak about a bad angle.