Alright, before I get on-topic, let me just do some bragging - I was just at a meeting in the local party place, known by the name "the Power Plant", and although I am pretty new to that place, I have quickly grown a part of the community. By the end of the meeting I was elected PR-responsible member of the Power Plant's Director Board. How fucking kewl is that!? HELLA FUCKING KEWL!!
Now, where was I? Oh, right, the on-topic part:
First of all, with the map of the world being made, I plan to soon expand the "Rules and Lore"-thread and add new information about the world to curious / new members of the group. Other than that, I really love what you have all being doing with your stories so far, so I wrote some comments to some of you below
@Paillan:
Yay! We have Paillan back, and better yet, with limited powers!
I see that your character now has an important connection to Vengeancekael, but again, please avoid using the Storyteller in future posts. I'm sure you understand that he is my personal tool to keep things in check, and that letting everyone get as much control over him as I have might result in a chaotic uncontrolled story. However, if you absolutely need to use him sometime in the future, please ask me for permission first.
Oh, and thumbs up from me to you for the part about Leila turning more angelic, and Kyrkow instead turning more demonic. This way, the characters are more easily recognizable as evil / good, and in your case that's great, because I'd prefer to avoid your characters doing like Paillan used to do, and switch side all the time.
Anyways, I sense that your roleplaying improves and that you are heading in the right direction, so keep up the good job!
@Alagremm & Xi Wangmu:
Alright, I admit it's an interesting thing you have going on there, and it's great to see both of you back in business!
Although I somehow dislike the fact that Frederica Bernkastel just left Vengeancekael's side as apprentice to succeed him in his job as Storyteller of Kaelicious, I understand that it is kind of a too limited role to have in the RP, so yeah, just go on.
But I must admit that I am slightly confused about this new little
Momo-character of yours, but I believe you intentionally kept hers and Bernkastel's relationship mysterious. Are they in fact the same person? What are your plans for Bernkastel in the future, if any?
(Don't spoil things if you don't wanna, and you intend to reveal it later on). By the way, by creating Momo, you have limited yourself to only create two new characters to the history for the remainder of 2014.
Oh and I also have a few things I'd like to discuss about this
Eastern Island that you are currently located on. Can we conclude that it is the small island just off the coast from the robotic prison in the Easter Land-region? For the big one on the border of my map, which is currently only marked by a question mark, is a place of future plans for the RP that I do not intend to reveal now. Anyways, I'm glad that you'll help out creating history for the smaller parts of the map as well. If you make this Eastern Island notable enough, I might update the map with new descriptions and stuff.
But carry on, I am indeed excited about what your plot leads to!
@Chenralstrasz:
I love those historic events you revealed about the Pandas and the Grepetts. I finally have a race for Gyro! Woohoo!
BUT I'd like you to still keep some things unknown and mysterious, especially their home location, for this exact thing might just become a useful element in a future holiday theme, and I'd rather have we reveal everything at the right time, where we can get to use the information for central roleplaying purposes.
Oh, and the easter egg about Gyro mentioning his "Not Twilight" book, in your post, was awzum! Haha
Anyways, go ahead and make up more stuff - I like it so far!
@kari0003:
Thanks again for keeping Kari out of this for the time being. I like this new character of yours, and will love to see where his plot is going, for right now, it is indeed difficult to tell. I'd like to ask if it's coincidental that he was insulted by being called "pig waste", or if you actually based the character on the pig dude who was blocking the toilet door in my old artwork of Gyro's Bar?
Note that by creating Yarrick, you also used up one of three options to add new characters to the RP for the remainder of 2014.
But yeah, I'm sure it's no surprise that I am excited about finding out what are your hidden intentions with this new dude ^^
