For the Lich king!

[Moderator]

23:44, 25th Feb 2009 by bounty hunter2:
A poorly developed cinematic which has a lot of typos, unknown author name and a strange plot. Since you won't update it Rejected. Thanks Septimus and AProject for the notice.

 

[knight26]

then whats the Unknown thing doig there?

 

[APproject]

I've noticed some grammar mistakes. Anub'arak or however his name was, mentioned Illidan forces and in the battle of creeps I saw Blood Elves. The battle, Arthas against Illidan took too long, I got bored after less than half time of fighting, also very boring cameras, almost everything from the sky. Especially it look badly while that pretty long fight, as I was saying, people might get bored quickly. Terrain could be better, you must pay much more attention to it. At the peak of mountain, I couldn't see Lich King's armor, I saw only the stairs of it.

The worst thing was - too long taking fight. Only for that I give 1/5. Improve it and then I'll make the final decision about the real rating.

 

[Septimus]

1) Invalid author name, breaking the site rules.
2) Lack of fog usage and weather effect, terrain was lacking as well.
3) Unit all seems to be place randomly.
4) Arthas and Illdan fight was badly make, all I seen was a camera shaking as if there was a 9.6 magnitude earthquake, few meteor coming down from the sky, both of them slash and slash and slash and the spartan music of spa spa spa spa spa spa.
5) Terrain have contradict with storyline from the campaign as well, there should be a staircase that lead to the Lich King. Try watch the ending sequence again.
6) Lot's of typo error.

1/5 from me. I guess I have explain more than enough of why it was unacceptable.

 

[sagi5533]

Wow I didn't thought it will be so boreing XD ,and I don't think I will upload
this cinematic again ,I will make other one with other story line ,I got bored from this one ,and I will notice what you guys said.
if you can send me guide that might help me with tigger editon ,and how to design the terrain. it will help me alot so thanks for helping me

 

[APproject]

You got bored of this map? I might make such a map in one day, so I don't understand you why you get bored of such easy-making map. I understand if you're making the map more than few months or little bit less and looking at the same spots of not changing terrain. You condemn this map for rejection by not updating it..

If you want a terrain ideas - take a look at Blizzard's melee maps or original's campaign Icecrown Glacier maps.

I guess this might help you.
Warcraft III World Editor, Warcraft III Map Making Tutorials, Warcraft III Scripting, Warcraft III Maps - World-Editor-Tutorials.thehelper.net

 

[sagi5533]

Well it didn't took months o.o i started it last weak ,and i want to try other story line ,i will try make map with that story line after i will try other one..

 

[Septimus]

Spending just 1 week would not get your map standard better.

 

[deepstrasz]

I thought it'd be more of a parody.
Crappy fighting sounds...
Appreciate the battle FX but continuously shaking the camera is not eye friendly.
No idea what's the point of this remake.
2/5.