Fire Jaina.blp

[Moderator]

14:19, 26th Mar 2009
Hawkwing: I'll admit it's better, but it still needs some work. Look at some tutorials and practice some shading techniques. Avoid any filters - there seems to be some on the cape - and try one more time.

Hawkwing: Alright, well, I don't see this ever being approved. Just keep practicing.

 

[syltman]

Naios +rep

 

[Misha]

honestly... get rid of that round... scorch? oO on her cheek it's ruining the skin totaly

not rated: =/

~Misha~

 

[plaid_man]

hey misha rate now

 

[Luckerguy]

I dont like it really.

Its very blurry and the armor looks crappy. Improve the Hair too.

 

[plaid_man]

ok well...hair aint my best area lol...its my worst so ill see what mod says and he says hair or blurriness ill fix that up

 

[Misha]

hey misha rate now

why would i rate it =S it's beeing similar all the time.... well do some good and exensive rework and skill up in working. then i'll rate it

~Misha~

 

[ike_ike]

Still a long way to goooo, 'though it's much improved.

The cape has no folds whatsoever, and looks vaguely like quilt. Also, the shading is coming from one direction, whereas in reality it should be lit from the top. The insignia on the cloak should also be affected by both folds and lighting. If you're really desperate and/or lazy, just copy the insignia onto a separate layer above the cloak, and set the blend mode to overlay (or hard/soft light ... whichever one works out).

Also, you have to really tighten up the colouring here. It's still rather messy and blurry. A smart sharpen should help a bit, but if you work at higher resolutions it should turn out all right.

The hair ... is a bit of a mess. Should all go in the same direction, and have both highlights and shadows. Your hair just looks like a mass of red curly things.

 

[matmat01]

She's better than the last time. Though that "padded" cloak doesn't look good at her. I mean, it's plastic not fiery.

 

[Misha]

hmm.. best if you start anew, friend 8)

 

[f0rsAk3n]

A fabulous Model indeed

 

[matmat01]

A fabulous Model indeed

Are you lost? this is the skins section.

 

[Misha]

rework the cape, get rid of that repeatative texture.
~Misha~

 

[GAniksdal]

Looks like she have been burned up in a pretty lame way.
Btw, is that black looking things smoke or burned cloth or something?