Final Days

[FamousPker49]

Terrain I am working on and could use some critique, which is why I am not asking in my showcase, cus nobody checks it lol. Anyhow, tell me what I should add/get rid of.

"The lands ravaged, people slaughtered, the human race all but had been wiped out. Taking there final stand in this very castle, a gift bestowed upon them when the sky turned gold, and the sky itself opened up."

 

[Nudl9]

You should add some more on the left side background and more to the front of the screenshot, its pretty empty there.
Dunno about the wall of flames, making them spread more random instead of a wall would maybe look better.

 

[Gausslander]

I actually like the wall of flames. I will say this, though, the castle is not structured properly, you should remake it.

 

[FamousPker49]

Well, the wall of flames, is supposed to be on purpose, from the Invaders burning their way in. And what do you mean about the castle?

 

[Arvedui]

I actually like this

Whats the thing coming down in the light?

 

[The_Silent]

when you zoom really really in, it looks like an angel

 

[FamousPker49]

It is an angel people. Lol. He is scaled to size, I may make him more visible though.

 

[Arvedui]

It is an angel people. Lol. He is scaled to size, I may make him more visible though.

I thought it was, I was just making sure lol

It's fine as it is

Goodjob.

 

[Gausslander]

The castle should be bigger, more slanted, it seems strange - as if it were made in about 5 minutes. You should make it cleaner, grander, and more beautiful.