Faceless One Tentacle Pit

[Moderator]

Misha 1st Aug 2013

Moderator's Review: Okay, i don't really like how white that whirlpool-like thingie is.. what if you remove all white and make it like the tentacle is coming out of sheer abyss, ala that dark purple whirlpool.
also.. i'm not happy with how the building's build animation looks, can't you add some spooky animated texture crawling all over the building as it constructs? think runes might be a good idea for the crawly texture

finally that pesky health bar is fixed i approve this

 

[_lycan]

Holy shit looks amazing and for just 46kb

 

[The Pale King]

Very cool

 

[WolfFarkas]

nice for underground enviroment

 

[Land-Sengklek]

Nice one 5/5 rep

 

[Alioth14]

in need of moar faceless one building! good job!!



hentai, tentacle rape

lol

 

[Misha]

Not enough edits!
heh, just kidding the texture rewrap looks pretty cool

sadly, I cannot check it ingame.. my computer crashed and is not working S:

 

[Klayton]

It looks very well made. You should give it upgraded versions as well. Like the other races have upgrades for their defensive emplacements. For example, to give it a melee attack upgrade a spike or a hook could be added to the end of the tentacle. Then for a ranged attack upgrade you could make it look like the tentacle is holding a boulder or a sludge ball. Then it would of course throw it on attack animation.

 

[takakenji]

amazing

 

[Wazzz]

love it, you rarely disappoint <3

 

[kellym0]

it looks cool, but klayton has a point, just a simple set of animations called upgrade first would be awesome, and easy too:

to implement his boulder idea, all you would have to do, would to be to build a second tentacle and a second set of vertexes for the boulder, and then make them invisible in the normal melee animations, and then make the normal melee tentacles invisible during the special upgrade first animations.

I on the other hand, always hated how the night elf ancient protector simply summons rocks out of no where, a better strategy for a tentacle might in fact be a longer more gnarly looking tentacle, rather then a grabbing boulder one, and make it covered in purple blue or pink lights, and then make the attack animation somewhat like flailing a whip, so that it could shoot bolts of purple blue or pink fire lighting or goo, and then you don't even really need much of an edit, just a bigger more magical looking tentacle, perhaps with extra fingers, like how all forgotten ones hands have 3 fingers.

as it is its pretty cool. I think its pretty cool even if the map does not have the forgotten race, its a cool demonic cave creep in general.

as for the melee tentacle as it is, I think its missing something, remember the forgotten one tentacles? how they where covered in teeth or barbs? I think if you go look at one of the fel hound models you'd notice some pretty gnarly teeth, this tentacle could perhaps use some teeth on the under belly side, that does the striking, so that its melee attack looks more vicious without adding too much file space or work. as it is it just looks like its gently patty slapping the top of you're head without really hurting you, teethed tentacles look pretty scary (check out Stephen Kings ''The Mist'' Garage Tentacle Scene for what I am talking about):

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mHc8hukbb5U -- this is a violent scene view discretion is advised.

6/10 as the model is now, it is pretty unique.

EDIT: in addition, a portrait camera would be capable of replacing you're portrait model too. so that you can knockdown even more space.

EDIT: right the portraits just the birth art my mistake

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Nice to see a faceless building!

 

[StonemaulMidget]

Beautiful detail, man.
Which Old God are those tentacles affiliated with?

 

[StonemaulMidget]

Can I have some of that Sushi?
Just kidding, I was talking about the model.

You probably know about this already, but there are bugs that require debugging:
-The Birth animation shows only the model being void-black.
-Unless it should have a water explosion like the Tidal Guardian, I see no special effects for the Death animation.
-When it does those Stand animations, you should have them slither out than shoot straight up like a stalk.
Otherwise, the Sushi Tower looks good.

 

[Karassu]

Good for hentai maps.

 

[vlekje5]

awesome , always wanted a meele tower
this model suits in perfectly for that.

 

[DeuceGorgon]

Nice job

 

[CfWolfy]

finaly somenthing cool for Faceless race...5/5

 

[xyzier_24]

Why does the keywords contain "hentai"?
Is it related to the model?

Anyways, i used it on my Altered Melee, and looks awesome together with other faceless.
5/5. Please make more faceless/forgotten Structure models

 

[Wazzz]

Why does the keywords contain "hentai"?
Is it related to the model?

we'll never tell

 

[Bloody Wolf]

dem keywords xD
really nice job plus no flaws on the animations 5/5

 

[Diegoit]

Does this works like Ancient of Protection/Naga guardian tower? (Facing the unit which it attacks)