Dragon

[Lord_of_sausage]

Ok, my very first drawing where i really tryed to make it look good. Made in MS paint ^^


My first dragon, no tutorial used.

My second dragon, no tutorial used, made for shadow test.

 

[Pyritie]

The part of the neck where it connects to the head is waaaaaaaaaaaaay too thin.

Some helpful tutorials: http://pyritie.deviantart.com/favourites/#Tutorials

 

[Kimbo]

Your dragons form is...all up to....god...its very messy.
Your dragon is also very flat, you need to work on your shading, study dragon faces and anatomy as this would really help you.
As for other issues, the spikes on the back/neck are just ..out of whack..they shouldn't be melting and should be even to allow flow and movement within the dragons neck.
As for another issue there is the horns, they arnt paper pieces sitting on him, they are cylinders and they are right on the central points of his body thus some small curve is possibly expect just to give it more form.
I also drew over your dragon just to give you a basic idea of a suggest form.

 

[Lord_of_sausage]

Thanks all to both of you
I know the shading is bad and the dragon looks flat. I've tryed to paint a dragon on paper, that went out much better, whit both shadows and uuh... flatness. I will try upload it later, if i cant get a scanner

Edit: Another dragon, also made in paint, made for testing where shadows seems to fit.

//lord_of_Sausage

ps: you'r dragon looks much better, wolf ^^

 

[Pyritie]

What about shadows underneath the belly?

And for #3, try a dragon WITH tutorials!

Seriously though. If it wasn't for tutorials and copying dragons from tarot card images, my dragons would look like poop.

 

[Lord_of_sausage]

What about shadows underneath the belly?

And for #3, try a dragon WITH tutorials!

Seriously though. If it wasn't for tutorials and copying dragons from tarot card images, my dragons would look like poop.

Ok, i'll try with tutorials next time
also, yes, i forgot shadow's on the belly.

 

[inverted]

This is pretty good for being done in MS paint but it could use some improvement. Seems pretty flat and thin. Other than that its pretty good.

 

[Lord_of_sausage]

I drawn a rather nice dragon on paper for some time ago, with tutorials, and it went out rather nice! (the feets was a little circleformed, though) But i dont got a scanner, so i cant upload it

 

[skeptis]

looks good but the neck is too thin

 

[Lord_of_sausage]

Thank you
my dad found a scanner, so i will upload soon.

 

[Nudl9]

I like the variation of colors you did, but those spikes on his back looks a bit strange, try making a 2-3 sketches before you do the real drawing.