Dragon Beast Sketch

[FamousPker49]

This is a little piece I did, to get myself back into drawing again. Took about 3 and half hours, but I would've been done in less time if I were not texting/talking during it. Oh well. Tell me what you think.

The back leg is funky and I forgot to add a spike.

 

[The_Silent]

Cool, althoug the the feets look a bit deform, and the last leg in right side looks a bit like its broken^^

 

[FamousPker49]

I fixed the back leg, but my scanner is being stupid, and not working. Any more critiques people?

 

[ike_ike]

Um, the front right leg is larger than the front left leg, even though it's further away. Also, you kinda seem to have overloaded on the scales.

 

[Hawkwing]

That back leg looks a bit 'broken'. It needs to be at a more sharp angle like 'L' versus a curved and 'seemingly boneless' angle like a 'J'.

Also, the quality changes a lot from the hair to the body. Make the hair more realistic and make each and every strand of hair more visible.

 

[FamousPker49]

Alright, I will update it, but I don't know wth my scanner is doing. So idk if I'll even be able to post the updates, but thanks for the critiques guys.

 

[Nudl9]

Very detailed, nice.

 

[Gilles]

The whole movement of the thing is awkward. None of the limbs seem the same length, and it just seems stiff. Give it more fluid looking motion.

 

[Madome]

You should look up some reference of a lizard or any animal with scales, it would be abnormal for a lizard to have all same-sized scales.

 

[Gausslander]

The cars are in fact more well-made then the dragon itself. The legs are what through me off. Maybe you should remake it where he is crouching, or flying over destroyed cars. As dragons don't really walk all that far unless forced to.

 

[FamousPker49]

I appreciate the comments, but my scanner is broke, and my camera sucks. So I doubt any updates will come about. And I thought that the pose was more like he was running through the streets, chasing something. That's what it was supposed to be like.