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Som new and old Screenshots of my terrains.
 

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Ii'll give a short review to one of them ;-)
Maybe I'll edit this later and add more ;-)


Ashandra Waterfall: THis is a screenshot with huge potential, the idea is brilliant, the bridge looks fine, same with the wood! But it needs some improvements, to became a really good picture: First I would mention the camera angle: I would change it a little, so that you can see more of the sky and less empty boring water. Making a terrain screenshot is a little bit of photograpy when it comes too choosing a camera view. And a photo aims to show the magnicifant parts which I think is the waterfall, the top of the trees and the sky. Not the plain water.
This was what I wanted to say to camera view.
Now on to the waterfall itself. I think it's a little odd and the starting point of it looks a bit unrealistic. Try adding some rocks into the water, not to dominant, so that they don't desroy the focus onto the waterfall itself, but some smaller one!
Did you try to add a sun behind the bridge? THis would might change it into an epic view!
also add some shrubs to the left trees, I would suggest!
By changing the camera view you could smaller the waterpart of terrain, which definatelly needs more work! Maybe try adding an import boat or something, this looks to bad for the rest of the terrain, especially the bridge.!
So this is my short review to this picture, hope it helps you a little ;-)
 
Well if I have to say i don't like it because it comes from nowhere (you can't see the river) and the rocks around it aren't around - they are under it. And it goes into the ground (in it's down side) . So you may want to fix that and shot t from different angle, oh ,also the water is kinda empty (maybe make it deeper)
but all other pics are ok I guess :)
 
Waterfall is flat. I'm can't to explain it, so i quote someone who is wiser than me.

And the waterfall is flat because its just a river going in a straight line and falling over edge which is exactly perpendicular to river's flow. Rivers are never like that.

Terrible pseudo-graphic incoming:

That's your river.

|\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|
|\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|
|\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|
|\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|
|\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|
==========
|\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|
|\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|
|\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|
|\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|
|\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|

That's how it's supposed to be:

||].\/.\/.\/.\/|\\
\.\/.\/.\/.\/.\/.\|
/.\/.\/.\/.\/.\/./|
|\/.\/.[].\/.\/|//
|\/.====.\/.|/
==//.fog.\\==
|=.lotsoffog=|
|].\/.\/.\/.\/[|\\
|\/.[].\/.\/.\/.\/|
|\/.\/.\/.[].\/.\/|
\\.\/.\/.\/.\/.\/|/

Where === is edge of waterfall, and .\/. is river flow, and || \\ // are river banks, and [] are stones sticking out.

Well, it's not very clear, but do you get an idea? If not, look at the other pictures of waterfalls.

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs26/i/2008/136/a/f/Waterfall_by_SusieStock.jpg
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs6/i/2005/034/b/7/Waterfall_by_PainIsBeautiful.jpg
 
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