Demonic Temple

[Moderator]

12:18, 27th Jan 2011
-Kobas-:
Map Status: Rejected
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[light bolt30]

Here's a list of BB Codes to help you improve the description; background of map, number of goldmines, creep camps, item drops, screenshots, etc. Please follow these submission rules:

Original Work
Maps must be significantly worked on, or entirely created, by their submitter.

Gameplay
Maps must be fairly fun and decently balanced.

Presentation
Maps must have adequate spelling and grammar. Maps must contain a valid author and map name. Maps must contain a proper description of what the map is about.

This map will not be approved in its current state.

 

[Mumbis]

Is it a map made by blizzard? If that's the case i'll change my rating on it ;S

 

[MrStormyZ]

Is it a map made by blizzard? If that's the case i'll change my rating on it ;S

I doubt Blizzard makes such maps.
what Lightbolt meant was this needs a description than some fantasy child story

 

[Mumbis]

Oh ok, well the description is indeed bad

 

[ap0calypse]

I put just fantasy to my maps because i think, if a map has nice minimap, the player will download it, but if the map is good with no minimap or foolish minimap, the player won't download it.

Again, no idea what you were trying to say.
Get another translator, google translate somehow sucks to do things like this. Or learn English.

• The goldmine creep camps are different (and so are their drops).
• Terrain seems nice, but a bit empty all over the place. The hills at the expansions should be smoothened.
  Also, there's a cave in the abyss... caves usually don't form in places like that.
• The expansion is rather hard to reach.

Fix the creep camp issue and improve the description to get it approved.
(And of course, attend to the other problems as well).

 

[-Kobas-]

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Demonic Temple
Created by JacoBB ; Uploaded by: JacoBB

Review

3 days passed and there is no word from author...

There are not enough trees near expansions, doodads are spammed on map middle, can't move army there.
Some creeps drop 2 items, some have 50% chance to drop 2 items...
Terrain is empty and well explained in post above!

Please if you decide to improve map just update this one and send message to us, we will unlock thread for you once again!
Map status: Rejected

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