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14:37, 8th Mar 2013
Kwaliti: Awaiting proof of permission to use the bow.
Moderator's Review:
Okies, permission obtained, now for moderation
the first thing i noticed is that the bow itself isn't really aligned that good, so it looks wonky when firing and holding, you might wanna see how the original model holds the bow and adjust accordingly, bow should be also centered so she holds it right in her hand as well, the next thing would be to try restoring the animation to the bow string, so it actually moves when firing. the next thing is that her drawing arm passes through her boobs in attack anims, so you might wanna tweak that as well.. maybe making the boobs a tad bit smaller, so it doesn't look that much like a derp. the Next thing, is her hair.. it is static, rather long and clips with the back/cloak. i suggest shortening the hair and also shrinking the whole head a lill bit., the back of her cloak is totally derp for some reason, re-wrapping would be great... and give her a quiver to store or lill fel magic on hand to draw arrows from, arrows too could use being fel magic-ish.
aaand.. i think that's all for now.. haven't found anything else to nitpick about
Kwaliti: Awaiting proof of permission to use the bow.
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Okies, permission obtained, now for moderation
the first thing i noticed is that the bow itself isn't really aligned that good, so it looks wonky when firing and holding, you might wanna see how the original model holds the bow and adjust accordingly, bow should be also centered so she holds it right in her hand as well, the next thing would be to try restoring the animation to the bow string, so it actually moves when firing. the next thing is that her drawing arm passes through her boobs in attack anims, so you might wanna tweak that as well.. maybe making the boobs a tad bit smaller, so it doesn't look that much like a derp. the Next thing, is her hair.. it is static, rather long and clips with the back/cloak. i suggest shortening the hair and also shrinking the whole head a lill bit., the back of her cloak is totally derp for some reason, re-wrapping would be great... and give her a quiver to store or lill fel magic on hand to draw arrows from, arrows too could use being fel magic-ish.
aaand.. i think that's all for now.. haven't found anything else to nitpick about
