Da Golem

[L2love]

Here's a golem i made while i was bored hope you like it =]

 

[~Void~]

Damn, those bricks in the city must be enormous.

 

[L2love]

lol if only u could shrink tile's =[

 

[Lexandritte]

Golem is awesome, but city could use some work on it. Brick tiles on hill suck

 

[Shad0wyone]

Golem is awesome, but city could use some work on it. Brick tiles on hill suck

I agree, the golem is awesome.

 

[Nbah]

Rawr, the golem is ok, but everything else is just plain wrong. First of all, the tiles will make anyones eyes bleed out into a canal of abyss. Never use that undetailed bright grass of doom thingy. The Bricks are also a bad choise, as they clearly make a dilemma of scale. There's absolutely no vegetation, not a single grass turf or anything. Use Page Down + CTRL to sink those ugly trees on the mountain. The sun is meh, nothing epic and a bit unrealistic. The city needs a lot of work. All you did was spam the same shit 4052302 times. Try to be original, you just spammed 30 houses + a big ass thing and repeated the process 40 times. The towers are ok, but wrong doodad choise, methinks. And the center big ass thing is just plain ugly. It has stretched textures and the overall design is ugly, view a bit of terrains here and see some original designs, try to copy them but add your own twist in the process. Also experiment with fogs, they play an important role in a terrain. Overall it's not a bad terrain for a beginner, not at all. I'm just telling you all the stuff you need to do to make it epic =3

 

[Slaydon]

omg, look at the size of the trees compared to the buildings :O

 

[Megafyr]

The face of the golem is fucking awesome. But you should really work on the hills/mountains. : <

 

[Destructor [DoR]]

The Golem looks really nice but the city and mountains .....

 

[HFR]

The mountains layout is ok, but the tiles and trees... meh

 

[L2love]

lol sorry I'm still new 2 terraining only bin like a few weeks since i started =[

 

[HFR]

Well, this isn't a good argument. My first terrain ever (whitout conting melee maps) was, sorry for say, much better than yours, and I made it in my first try

 

[Dr. House]

the mountains and sun sucks but that creature made of doodads is uber nice

 

[redscores]

HFR, if I would compare your terrains to mine old showcase I could laugh at you too... so please, he did a great work for a beginner with that golem, and be silent now please.

 

[HFR]

I'm just saying that just because it's his first terrain, it doesn't need to have a poor tile work. The tiles need more variation.

Also, the tiles are very stretched in the city. In a terraining contest, this small detail can cost the victory.

 

[L2love]

ya but I'm not entering a contest I'm just bored and wanted 2 make a golem

 

[HFR]

And you did it well. The golem is very good, but the environment needs work.