Clan s0uL Movie 0.9d

[Asgard_Ragna]

A movie map which is protected....god how poor

 

[Hemlock]

And neither is it really good.

Terrain is kinda blunt, I think you could really work on using some more deforms and perhaps filling up terrain a bit more.
some triggering could have been done a bit more proper as well since some actions were not really that well timed.

Other than that, I think you should work on your camera motion, and although placement of camera's was not really bad, motion is essential.

The storyline was average not really good, but neither was it bad.

The one good scene was with the ilidan and the blademaster although it kinda ended poor with just one blow.

The credits camera were really bad, please use another form of credits cause showing the border of an map is not really good and neither is using a random camera really for a cinematic.

all in all I would give it a 6 for the effort, but yet there is enough to improve on, I advice looking at my own cinematic I made a long time ago, you can on the contrary open the map and have a look in the triggers and other stuf if you like.

Greets

 

[JarrardKO]

Why in God's name would you protect a cinematic map?

 

[Freakazoid]

To protect you work, make the size smaller, and hide the triggers.

Why do you need to open a cinematic map,..

 

[Hemlock]

To learn of it obviously, or to point out flaws in trigger use if you review the cinematic.

 

[Ralle]

OK seeing these comments... I just think this isn't worth download.
So do what Warnicro said, I trust him and I don't review protected maps. Protection is against the war3 mapmaking policy - what should it be for since you don't get money for good technology anyways?! And the size reduction is so small that it doesn't matter really... :roll:

 

[CatcherOfSouls]

update: uploaded unprotected map. anyones free to look at the triggers and all. any feedback on those?

-Catcher

 

[Mechmap]

Not so good, though the Illidan - Blademaster scene reminded me of the battle cinematic Fury a little.
5/10

 

[CatcherOfSouls]

thx for command jan, i liked making the illidan scene a lot, but buggy tho

 

[sauron199]

bah, me i very like it

 

[deepstrasz]

-they're standing with their feet on the chairs
-....... what does this have to do with Nazi?
-cinematic scene cannot be skipped...

1.5/5.