LOTR movie

[Moderator]

18:43, 23rd Jan 2011
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[Karaeski]

well done,but its hard to guess whats happening if u didnt watch the movie couple of times,you must add some description about whats happening.

 

[kidsoulex]

- Bad description: you dont give us enough information about the cinematic
- Minimap preview doesnt seems good: terrain seems plain but will check and tell what i think

Edit: Too short, no story and some pointless actions like why did footman surrond that shadow if it already smashed a bit of their army and the paladin? they were waiting for their death(also its hard to know without dialogues)

 

[Slayer14]

well done,but its hard to guess whats happening if u didnt watch the movie couple of times,you must add some description about whats happening.

Hmm. Are you his good buddy?

Oh yeah, I've never seen LoTR, I don't know what it's about. So there is probably no point in me watching this.

 

[kidsoulex]

Hmm. Are you his good buddy?

Oh yeah, I've never seen LoTR, I don't know what it's about. So there is probably no point in me watching this.

The only common sense of this cinematic with LoTR its humans vs orcs nothing else

 

[BlackKnightTGS]

Okay, watched it:
- First of all, use BB Codes to improve description.
- There's no music? And terrain is plain and flat as well (no offense) xP (Village Fall doesn't fit Mordor to be honest)
- Sauron's model isn't working.
- No custom models :/ And by the way, what's with Skeleton Archers? And Mordor Orcs are gray, not green ._. FrIkY's Brown Orc skins could fit better in my opinion.
- What's with the "test.mp3" import?
- No credits (for the Sauron model and people (if there are any) who helped you)
- Cameras are almost always...steady...not moving.
- TRIGGER LEAKS @_@ Honestly, 25 cinematic triggers that could be combined in...one...or two...
- Don't use the Victory screen, nor make the player see that he's victorious. Just hide the score screen and victory dialog. Also, why did you make Player 12 victorious?
- Why did Footmen surround Sauron/the mysterious shadow? In the movie, both Orcs and Humans did...
- You forgot Mount Doom? xD

You should add dialogs too in my opinion...like a Storyteller for those who haven't watched the movie.
2/5 and Vote for Rejection.

 

[Slayer14]

Um, shouldn't this Cinematic be a little bit longer if it's LoTR? I mean like I said I've never watched it, but it's probably longer than 2 min. and 10 sec. I know it's probably only like at the most 5 important scenes from the movie, but the movie is probably... I don't know from 1:30:00-2:00:00 long. If you wanted to just whip something up really quick this is okay... I guess, though you shouldn't do that and upload it here if you catch my drift.

 

[garg39]

good... you just need subtitles to tell whats going on. also one of the models needs a bit of tweaking. Sauron's model is not working correctly.

 

[BlackKnightTGS]

Um, shouldn't this Cinematic be a little bit longer if it's LoTR? I mean like I said I've never watched it, but it's probably longer than 2 min. and 10 sec. I know it's probably only like at the most 5 important scenes from the movie, but the movie is probably... I don't know from 1:30:00-2:00:00 long. If you wanted to just whip something up really quick this is okay... I guess, though you shouldn't do that and upload it here if you catch my drift.

Well, most LotR cinematics (like this one) are basically the intro of the first movie, Humans and Elves marching to Mordor, fighting Orcs, Sauron comes in, kills Humans, Isildur kills Sauron, Sauron explodes, Humans and Orcs near him die, cinematic ends. And well, movies are 2+ hours if they're the extended editions and stuff.

 

[Slayer14]

Well, most LotR cinematics (like this one) are basically the intro of the first movie, Humans and Elves marching to Mordor, fighting Orcs, Sauron comes in, kills Humans, Isildur kills Sauron, Sauron explodes, Humans and Orcs near him die, cinematic ends. And well, movies are 2+ hours if they're the extended editions and stuff.

Huh, well that sounds lame. And also, now I think the title should be LoTR Intro or something a little less misleading to prevent future misconceptions.

 

[kidsoulex]

So the shadow its Sauron? Should have guessed

 

[Andrep7410]

Ill post link on youtube, there is sauron normal.

 

[Andrep7410]

Here is the link on youtube video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGO9JaZK67Q ,there is normal model of Sauron in movie

 

[ap0calypse]

• Bad camera use (very static, moves sloppy).
• Bad terrain (empty, a few obvious hills and a few cliffs, nothing more).
• Import fails.
• Weak battle scenes (soldiers bump against each other all the time, actual battles look more turn-based than real-time).
• Very poor triggering. Just look at the trigger name: "scene 1 Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy Copy", I mean seriously...
  You also have leaks and all triggers are inefficient.
• Not original (this exact scene already exists on the hive, but then better).

 

[Slayer14]

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Huh, thought this would have atleast had some kind of chance and maybe just get rejected, but I guess it's for the best.

Just said that it's a shame that maps get spammed too...