Cinamatic Checkover

[Deleted member 177737]

I just finished the first map of a campaign im making and I need someone who is good at making cinamatics to check it over for mistakes.


+rep for the first person to check, fix if needed, and review it.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin.php?id=cbpq7v

 

[Tau Empire]

Wait so what am I suppose to do exacly?

 

[baassee]

Wrong section, use the Request section instead or the trigger section.

 

[Deleted member 177737]

1. Download
2. Play the cinamatic & look for errors
3. Tell me about the errors
4. Review it

 

[Tau Empire]

Ok well simple enough after checking it out, what have I seen?

The Necromancer says Come my Minions 2 times and The Master Will be Pleased 2 times as well.

I'm not sure if you placed in music in it or not, but if you didn't try to.

Spelling errors, like other side (you wrote outher side or something like that.)

The narrator said But I my powers are weakin instead some random word after that, should be something like, But my powers are weakened drastically.

 

[Deleted member 177737]

Ok, thx
+rep


Edit--

Says i hafto spread it around, ill try again later.

 

[Tau Empire]

Lol it's alright, you need to rep someone else before re rep me. I'll see if I can keep my mouth shut lol.