at the 2nd shot, there is no shading in front of her leg area, on the cheetah, add more shadows, brown stuff here. the cheetah isn't enough orange-like, it's too pale here. the face is already more orange than the body, but a more would be nescesarry.
someone else noticed the crazy line at her throat, the shading, maybe an accident, is too dark and deep. it would look like shit on the portrait.
from the 2nd shot her armor really looks like too blank - and it's true, on the blp it's really empty,
here again you gotta do something immediatly.
and this time, don't delete the submission, replace it.
1/5 +1 for not being a boring recolor, 2/5 -1 beceause you submitted twice and i had to remake my comment.
result 2/5 on the physical aspect
1/5 on the technical aspect
3/5 on the originality