BTNTrollface

[Moderator]

17:26, 19th Oct 2010
Pyramidhe@d: A little cartoony but thats ok. You need to put more shading to make sure all the shape are visible. The mouth especially. its a little faint right now.

 

[Krl70]

hmm... too blank imo, try to add more rincles, and make some shading at the skin around the tusk, as it is several of the signs that it is a troll, so far it more looks like a goblin.

 

[Fjury]

Subscribing and leaving a larger pic

Edit: Do never expect anything awesome from me.

Second edit:

This is the old one.

Here is the new one.

 

[Krl70]

Edit: Do never expect anything awesome from me.

Well, i just might, promising, but you would need to update a time or two

 

[Mainy]

Its to cartoonish.

 

[Jaret]

Wow... This is actually a little too nice for 1st icon. Ok, but still... Add more shadings, and make the tooth look like it is really sticking out of the mouth.

 

[-Grendel]

the tusk looks like it's attached on his cheek, fix that. other than that nice icon

 

[rcshaggy]

Could I use it as a ability for the Forest Trolls in my campaign I'm making?

 

[Krl70]

well, that's up to you, he makes the icon, you use it.

 

[rcshaggy]

Well I don't want to claim the icon for myself though and I want his permission first as well.

 

[Krl70]

Just give him credit's and you should be good to go i would think.

 

[-Grendel]

Well I don't want to claim the icon for myself though and I want his permission first as well.

dude you don't need his permission if you're going to use it in your map

unless if you will edit and upload the icon to other websites?

 

[Fjury]

Feel free to use it, and just as they said, you do not need my permission to have it on your maps.

Edit: I'm supriced that I've 4/5 rating for this icon

 

[Krl70]

Much better, but the green line on the outside? And it still looks like a goblin, now because of the little... vampireteeth

 

[Fjury]

I made the green line to split the face from the backround and I've made a attempt to bring forth a shape of the troll's chin to make it look less like a goblin.

 

[Krl70]

i suggest removing the green line, pardon me but the green actually looks like you lost the pencil across the picture
tho this time, shading 's much better, not because of the blurr pencil, but because of where the lights shows up.

 

[Panda]

The ear is too big.

 

[Fjury]

Updated, once again!

 

[The_Silent]

Add black outlines, make the shadows fade out to black not dark green and add som highlights too ^^

 

[-Grendel]

i agree with the post above, black outlines instead of green.
but then again, it is much better now than the last time i saw it

 

[Fjury]

But exchange the shadows to black from darkgreen, will that not make the icon look somewhat crazy when the shadows are so dark?

 

[The_Silent]

But exchange the shadows to black from darkgreen, will that not make the icon look somewhat crazy when the shadows are so dark?

That was why i suggested highligths too ^^

 

[Fjury]

Something like this?

but with some more effort, of course.

 

[Krl70]

bye bye green line, but the lighted up black doesn't fit, as it is light... dark...

Jackpot: 300 posts

 

[Super-Sheep]

I expected something else...

 

[Fjury]

Well, the highlights was just made in haste and became sloppy.

 

[The_Silent]

Good, although I think the forehead needs some rework ^^