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08:13, 17th Aug 2009
zombie2279: The color scheme is rather basic, and the whole thing is simple. Try increasing the size of the lightning or using a different color, it blends in with the impact effect a bit too much. Since the impact effect is basically consistant of a few simple lines, I recommend reworking it to something actually resembling an explosion. Try anything that makes this more detailed, lightning forks, a handle for the whip, a caster or whatever you can come up with.
8:51, 20th Aug 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, rejected until updated.
zombie2279: The color scheme is rather basic, and the whole thing is simple. Try increasing the size of the lightning or using a different color, it blends in with the impact effect a bit too much. Since the impact effect is basically consistant of a few simple lines, I recommend reworking it to something actually resembling an explosion. Try anything that makes this more detailed, lightning forks, a handle for the whip, a caster or whatever you can come up with.
8:51, 20th Aug 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, rejected until updated.