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02:21, 16th Oct 2009
enjoy: There is too many stars in the background. Remove some of them. I think it needs more highlights, and you have to rework the meteor or falling star in the middle. The fire needs to surrond the whole object, and not just the sides. The purple 'tail' on it, should begin to meet, and not just continue parallel. Also add more red and yellow to the fire, and maybe some white in the top of the fire, to make it seem really hot.
enjoy: There is too many stars in the background. Remove some of them. I think it needs more highlights, and you have to rework the meteor or falling star in the middle. The fire needs to surrond the whole object, and not just the sides. The purple 'tail' on it, should begin to meet, and not just continue parallel. Also add more red and yellow to the fire, and maybe some white in the top of the fire, to make it seem really hot.