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00:50, 29th Nov 2015
Sin'dorei300: Commented.

21:07, 29th Dec 2015
Sin'dorei300: It'd be nice to see at least some improvements regarding shading/highlights.
For avoiding flatness i suggest u to use a richer tonal range in ur drawing.

 

[The Panda]

Interesting.. well its very confusing too me, i don't understand what it is everything is mismatched. Plus the colors just confuse me also, define the colors up more so it can bring everything to life.

 

[Warcraftplay]

 

[Eldin HawkWing]

The Color are too Bright.

 

[Roland]

Why is it Pencil drawn? Anyway, Nice tho but.
-Lacks of shading of the red parts
-Lessen the brightness of the red parts
-Remove the fucked up background you made
-Needs more proper perspective area of the drawing

That's all I can give you but overall, I might give you a decent rating.
Such a decent work you got there, 'Bub.

 

[BETABABY]

Why is it Pencil drawn? Anyway, Nice tho but.
-Lacks of shading of the red parts
-Lessen the brightness of the red parts
-Remove the fucked up background you made
-Needs more proper perspective area of the drawing

That's all I can give you but overall, I might give you a decent rating.
Such a decent work you got there, 'Bub.

It is scanned.. Using a "scanner" (Thanks, Captain Obvious!)

 

[Eldin HawkWing]

It is scanned.. Using a "scanner" (Thanks, Captain Obvious!)

Scanned?!?!

 

[BETABABY]

Pencil Drawn?? Ofc its scanned.. maybe

 

[-Grendel]

i think my eyeballs just melted.

 

[Roland]

i think my eyeballs just melted.

Me either.

I would Fix that Icon if I were you, Warcraftplay.

 

[WhiteFang]

If you improve the shading and decrease the overall brightness this will be a pretty neat and useful icon

 

[Da Beast]

Would you post the fitting model??
I think this is useful.

 

[BETABABY]

Would you post the fitting model??
I think this is useful.

Naga Royal Guard model.. Just search it in the Model Section.

 

[Eldin HawkWing]

Now i realize that this icon is 100% REAL Hand Work >_<

 

[BETABABY]

Now i realize that this icon is 100% REAL Hand Work >_<

Its pencil drawn.. Its supposed to be a 100% handwork

 

[Eldin HawkWing]

......
lol. What are you talking about??! i dont understand what your saying.
Btw i already finish your icon.. check it out on Your Album

 

[Warcraftplay]

This icon did not go as expected

I update it soon.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

It looks like a part of a comic book page.
It needs color variation and, of course, shading.
I suggest u to work with darker/lighter tones of the chosen colors and avoid black outlines.
My advice is to read some tutorials and practice.
Tuts:
How to Make an Icon
General Icon Process Tutorial
Basic Icons Tutorial
ICONS by Crazyrussian
Basic Icon Guide