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BTNMeteor

Submitted by Scythy Dervish
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
An icon for an meteor spell

//UPDATE: Added Cracks

Big Picture:
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Keywords:
Fire, Meteor, Cookie, Burn, Rock, Stone, BäM
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BTNMeteor (Icon)

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15:34, 12th Mar 2010 enjoy: way too cartoonish.. Needs highlights, shading, blending.. enjoy: As the users also said, still too cartoonish. Look at some tutorials please. Some tutorials here http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=meteor+tutorial
  1. 15:34, 12th Mar 2010
    enjoy: way too cartoonish.. Needs highlights, shading, blending..

    enjoy: As the users also said, still too cartoonish. Look at some tutorials please. Some tutorials here http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=meteor+tutorial
     
  2. Nillere

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    Seriusly need some improvements, tho fire is more or less good done, if it's your first icon.
     
  3. Scythy Dervish

    Scythy Dervish

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    Its my second ^^
    (the phoenix at my signature)
     
  4. 13L4M3

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    Ever heard about too "cartoonish" before :) ?
    This is a great example.
    I think you should lower the brigthness in the colours, you could also draw some cracks overall the whole meteor :).
    Even though you're not that bad in the begining :), you'll grow big ;).
    But your Phoenix was epic :D ! also check out my sword, it's in the top of the icons atm i think.
     
  5. KelThuzad

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    Really?... Sriously?...

    Would you use it in your map?...
     
  6. War_Golum

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    LoL very simple, blurry and undefined
     
  7. GolluM_KoMe

    GolluM_KoMe

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    It looks like a pizza xD
     
  8. The Panda

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    The effect to make the rock look like its moving is quite off-set, also the details of the meteor itself are lacking.
     
  9. 13L4M3

    13L4M3

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    Well.... :3!
    The concept is good but use more darker and more "boring" colours, it's those who will make the work look awesome!
    With these colours you're using now it will look so cartoony :D!
    I also recommend if you're not already doing:
    Post your updates in your albums before putting 'em out and then let somebody check if it's awesome or if it needs any slight fixes before it's uploaded at hive!
    I'd recommend you use a burning tool with low opacity and spray the whole picture till it looks better.
    Or you just make it less cartoony :3 !
     
  10. War_Golum

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    New ability, pizza meteor o_O
     
  11. Raging Ent

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    This somehow makes me want to draw a meteor.. hmm !
     
  12. Lore-Wolf

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    you really should improve it. that cookie is baked way to hard. use more shading.