BTNIndonesia3

[Moderator]

17:24, 28th Sep 2010
enjoy: Lacks highlights, shading, definition and proper background. Also, it's not very useful imo, and it needs alot of work. Look at some tutorials and rework it, before updating it.

 

[Misha]

..is that a cloth or tile?

 

[snowman990]

..is that a cloth or tile?

it's a flag

 

[NoMoreChallenge]

it's a flag

He KNOWS EXACTLY that it's flag, but the point is it doesn't look like flag, just plain red and white strips. You should at least draw the whole flag to make it looks better and more chance of approval.

 

[Golden-Drake]

try zoom out to give it edges and make shadows to make it more realistic

 

[-Peper-]

give shading and cloth-like flap-flop

 

[A]

I'm agree with NoMoreChallenge and Golden-Drake.

 

[M0rbid]

Could you make a collection of every flag of the world? But please freehand all, it would be GREAT!

 

[snowman990]

Could you make a collection of every flag of the world? But please freehand all, it would be GREAT!

okay i make very flag of the world

 

[M0rbid]

Happy time producing the more complex flags freehanded!

(Too sad that there's no irony tag)

 

[chilla_killa]

You need shading. Especially on the staff.

 

[Panda]

Black BG please, also yes you need shading on the flag's cloth and on the hilt holding the flag up.

 

[snowman990]

okay i will edit it.
But not now i'm tooo tired.

 

[Zealon]

Well, its ok for your first icon. But yeah, Golden-Drake is right, more shadows.

 

[darkdeathknight]

What program do you use? If you use paint, try something better.

 

[snowman990]

What program do you use? If you use paint, try something better.

yes i use paint.okay... i'l try using photoshop.

 

[chilla_killa]

If you don't want to spend money on a program, like me, try GIMP it's free and VERY good for MANY purposes.
All my Icons were made with it.

 

[Mainy]

Icon Review	Status:
Idea 6/10 Freehand 4/10 Background 2/10 Shading 3/10 Ligthning 3/10 Total: 18/50	1.8/5 Disapproved

Blurry and indefinite. You will need to improve a lot to be approved.

 

[darkdeathknight]

Icon Review	Status:
Idea 6/10 Freehand 4/10 Background 2/10 Shading 3/10 Ligthning 3/10 Total: 18/50	1.8/5 Disapproved

Blurry and indefinite. You will need to improve a lot to be approved.

I like your setting out and crap Mainy, but you don't tell why it gets 2 points for the background or 6 for something else.

 

[AlienAtSystem]

This is my first icon i know it's ugly.I get BORED so i make this icon thingies.Remember,i'm still newbie!

Thats EXACTLY the kind of icon Pyramidhead will reject. Never upload a boredom icon, never hope to get a better rating because its you first icon or because you are a newbie.
This Icon is blurry flat and useless.

 

[Mainy]

I like your setting out and crap Mainy, but you don't tell why it gets 2 points for the background or 6 for something else.

I did not say because it's obvious... The conception is very poorly and blurry.

 

[Mechanical Man]

Blue background made me think this is Dutch flag.

 

[medion555]

It looks like its a dutch flag (i live in the netherlands so don't tell me wrong)

Try using a black background with a white circle in the middle thats brighter in the middle and more transparent on the ends.

It looks too much like a dutch flag.

 

[Zealon]

Well, I think he also knows what his own flag looks like, he's from indonesia you know. They are similar but not exactly the same. look closer.

 

[Titania]

Use photoshop , it's great for 2D stuffs :>