BTNBurningBladeGrunt

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17:13, 14th May 2014
Sin'dorei300: It's blurry, the helmet needs better definition, and the blood looks like ketchup.

12:47, 20th May 2014
Sin'dorei300: The nose is in another perspective than the face, the whole thing is blurry and the helmet looks like a black ''blob''.
Add proper highlights to the helm and define it better.

12:09, 30th May 2014
Sin'dorei300: Commented.

22:02, 22nd May 2015
Sin'dorei300: Commented.

11:49, 8th Sep 2015
Sin'dorei300: Approved.

 

[PlankingWolf]

Now that is badass.
Vote for approval, 5/5.

 

[Heinvers]

Whoaaaa. That's awesome. Although if I were you I would zoom it out a bit and change that angle just a little.

 

[PlankingWolf]

Whoaaaa. That's awesome. Although if I were you I would zoom it out a bit and change that angle just a little.

Grom has the same "zoomed in" effect and has sort of that angle.

 

[Argos]

I dont like a black "something" (probably helm or cape) around it's face. I know model itself has a black headwear, but the icon looks just so wrong with it.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Do u think the helmet stands out from the background?

 

[Heinvers]

Do u think the helmet stands out from the background?

I for one still think that it needs to be redone completely. Right now it looks like a black blob, shapeless (at least that's what it looks to me). It seems off right now, which brings down the rest of the icon

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Something's wrong with the helmet.
It looks like the helmet's on the top of his head, the nose-protecting thingy it's on his forehead instead of his nose -in ur icon.
Additionally, the nose still doesn't look right.

 

[Panda]

Nice update!

 

[Sin'dorei300]

The perspective in the first version was more interesting, but it's ur choice.
For the new one, the lower lip(kinda too much lines/creases on it), his chin & tusks(his lower jaw) are oddly shaded.
Also, the helm could use better shading/definition.
Shadows and highlights are added considering the position of the source/s of light.
I suggest u to improve the shading.

 

[kakuzu]

It really fits the model . Nice job !