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BronzeDragonSlave

Submitted by eubz
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
Two of my bronze dragon theme models have been approved, so I decided to create this unit. A slave to work for them. I think this might be useful.

Keywords:
slave, worker, dragon, bronze, eubz
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BronzeDragonSlave (Model)

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17:31, 7th Apr 2012 shamanyouranus: Too simple of a change. And the team color on those legs looks really weird, like he's wearing pants over his teamcolor painted legs. shamanyouranus: Much better now.
  1. 17:31, 7th Apr 2012
    shamanyouranus: Too simple of a change. And the team color on those legs looks really weird, like he's wearing pants over his teamcolor painted legs.

    shamanyouranus: Much better now.
     
  2. Direfury

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    This is just a retextured Mur'Gul Slave.

    You've got the basics down, now let's see some more customized things.
     
  3. eubz

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    I just thought Murgul Slave fits mostly because it already has spikes on its back, razor hands and feet, and the shape of the face seems to fit perfectly as dragon slave. IDK, just my opinion. What you say?
     
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    I'd suggest adding some frills, decorative things to make this model different from what it was based on.
     
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    Ok, this is something new.
    Never really thought about using the bronze dragon and a murloc together,
     
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    hm, i'm surprised the UV is really fine on this model. i'd say useful 3/5
     
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    Try to add something like small Wings, Spikes on the head like as bronze dragon have, add tail or something like this.

    Soory for my English.
     
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    Looks funny! :D
     
  9. sonofjay

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    When I clicked on it I did not bother reading the the name, cause I said to myself this is a murloc, now I'm surprised that this was a dragon slave I was like

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    just like the other said, add more things on it, like small wings, maybe a tail?
     
  10. InfernalTater

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    Too simple of an edit, man. You should change the shape of the head, make it a bit smaller, more dragon-shaped.
     
  11. Misha

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    that horn is not standing that nicely.. could you maybe put it a lill more down and possibly bend it a bit up?

    could also use tiny horns or fins where ears should be
     
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    Well when i saw a geosset count... Thats why such a simple model has such a huge size...

    And yeah it needs small wings and better portrait animations; camera... As your UV mapping skills need improveent too.
     
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    also, like i said before in one of your models, don't restrict yourself in one texture.
     
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    It's looking better, but you definitely need to work on the hands and feet, give them some scales and claws?
     
    Last edited: Apr 12, 2012
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    Looks better,
     
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    Looks much better than it did. :3
     
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    Decent after the changes, but still way too basic. Can be useful in certain situations, does what it intends. Simple, yet very high filesize if you ask me But that could be due to the huge amount of animations included. You should consider comprimizing the texture a bit though.
    Overall okayish.
    3/5
     
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    um.. texture is basically zero bytes, since it's ingame Oo
     
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    Believe it or not I actually like the look. Makes me think of like an underdeveloped dragon/dinosaur looking thing :) will test in game in a couple minutes and get back with my rating :)

    EDIT:
    Alright so tested in game, it was interesting, head and body look fine, but hands and feet are just white. If you could fix that it would look a lot better, and maybe make markings on back TC.

    I give it 6/10 not bad :grin: