Bone Knight.blp

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Bone Knight

Created by x-omg-x



A very old skeleton. Its known under the name Bone Knight.
The bone knight strikes its enemies with his bonesword and its unholy powers.
The heavy armor makes it also hard to break, but if you hit its bones, it will most likely break into pieces.

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Feel free to leave a comment!

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Keywords:
bone, knight, skeleton, unholy, break, old, overgrown, armor, metal, metallic, heavy, x-omg-x, skin, undead, creep
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20:47, 1st Feb 2010 CloudWolf: It could do with some improvements, but its definately decent enough to be approved! :) The texture of the bones are pretty good. However, the shield and armour looks a bit like stone rather than armour ;) I'de...

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20:47, 1st Feb 2010
CloudWolf: It could do with some improvements, but its definately decent enough to be approved! :)

The texture of the bones are pretty good. However, the shield and armour looks a bit like stone rather than armour ;) I'de suggest adding a few highlighted areas to maske them "shine" a bit more. Perhaps even a few scratches if your feeling up to it ;)

All in all though, its a neat little skin :D
 
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Face does not fit the body, the chest bones are to FAT, and thats not how the sternum looks like.. its more like a.. sword shaped..and some other anatomic errors..
also have you noted how the armor continues on his lags?.. thats ugly.. i mean, metal tights? XD..
 
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I would work on more freehand on the face cause right now it looks like the originals head, also more variation in color on the bones overall. And whats with the fur? i thought it was heavy armor!
 
ok first of all, please oh please stop going dodge and burn happy without even blending it in. the scratchy effect it gives off is so unappealing its not even funny. try blending it in with the blur tool because we don't want to see your directional strokes from those tools. (on the shield i can tell you went a little swirly with the dodge. (facepalm))
second. those proportions are so off. fix them by maybe looking at a picture of a skeleton and then trying it all out. But until those are done, i don't see any reason why this would be approved.
 
ok first of all, please oh please stop going dodge and burn happy without even blending it in. the scratchy effect it gives off is so unappealing its not even funny. try blending it in with the blur tool because we don't want to see your directional strokes from those tools. (on the shield i can tell you went a little swirly with the dodge. (facepalm))
second. those proportions are so off. fix them by maybe looking at a picture of a skeleton and then trying it all out. But until those are done, i don't see any reason why this would be approved.

First of all. Thanks for the feedback everybody. I've changed the head and a metal part. Look at the screenshots to see the update.

Dentothor. The armor is supposed to have that 'scratchy' effect. But i will see what i can do to make you happy. And about the second thing you mentoded. I dont know what proportions mean. But i will try to define the overall texture a tad more. Thanks for your feedback.
 
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~Well it is a bit better now, as i mentioned before, the body proportions are still not right(the chest bones are fat, the sternum is a bit different that i should actually be)
~metal gloves are not good at all, can u alpha out some part actually try to make them ~sceletal hands? that would be great.,
~The metal also is a bit, well not metal enough..
~change the sword, its ugly.
~make him better leather clothes, that one is kinda..looks really.. not leather-like nor fur-like. :/
~white teeth? awsumm! :D, and alpha out some teeth, let him have like 4-5 teeth, and 2 of those teeth color in GOLD, 3 others in black, ruste teeth..
~Add cracks to the skull, that will be Awesome...

seriously make those changes i mentioned, cos i really love the idea, if u dont pull it up, Ill try to pull it up after a while! :D
im not rating at this state :/
 
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AEURGG*cough*... Revert the teeth back to he normal state! It looks terrible! Still might wanna change the loincloth.
 
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The miniature scratches all throughout the skin will pretty much never show up in WC3. Make the scratches bigger, and make less of them.

The teeth should be the same color as the rest of the bones.

The shield and sword are way to plain. Add some details to them, the sword should have a highlighted half and shaded half. Adding nicks into the sword would be cool as well.

The fur underwear doesn't match anything else on the skin, I'd recommend making it more like the plate skirt found on the footmen.

I like the screenshot, the bone is pretty cool, I just wish you incorporated that kind of detail in your skin XD
 
The miniature scratches all throughout the skin will pretty much never show up in WC3. Make the scratches bigger, and make less of them.

The teeth should be the same color as the rest of the bones.

The shield and sword are way to plain. Add some details to them, the sword should have a highlighted half and shaded half. Adding nicks into the sword would be cool as well.

The fur underwear doesn't match anything else on the skin, I'd recommend making it more like the plate skirt found on the footmen.

I like the screenshot, the bone is pretty cool, I just wish you incorporated that kind of detail in your skin XD

Thanks for your comment. Will see what i can do to improve it.
I will try to answer your comments.

First of all - will fix the teeths.
About the sword and shield - will see what i can do.
And the fur - it actually started being a plate but people prefered something else than that. But i can try to do it again.
Thanks, i also spend some time on making the screenshot :p

Well. Thank you for your comment. I will try to improve the skin as much as i can.

Misha said:
The ribs are too thick and don't even look like ribs :/
I dont think i can make 'em smaller. I've changed their size to half the original size of the ribs blizzard made.
And the bone in the middle of the chest keeps looking fat in the bottom. I've reduced that bones' size slightly too.
 
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