blood mage(upgrated)

[Moderator]

Moderator: Pharaoh_ Date: 22:35, 12th Jul 2012 You really need to read the Spells' section Rules. Lacks a working, in-game screenshot, leaks, uses waits, has nothing to do with MUI, refers to pre-set units. Unacceptable Useful Links: Spell Rules

 

[Tank-Commander]

You need an ingame screenshot or your breaking the rules, also you're using waits, spells are not MPI/MUI.

For others:

Triggers

• Flame Strike
  • Events
    • Unit - Blood Mage 0374 <gen> Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Огненный столб(Улучшенный)
  • Actions
    • Wait 0.25 seconds
    • Set Angle = (Facing of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>)
    • Set Point = (Position of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>)
    • For each (Integer A) from 1 to 11, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Unit - Create 1 Dummy for (Owner of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>) at ((Position of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>) offset by Rast towards Angle degrees) facing Default building facing degrees
        • Unit - Set level of Огненный столб(Улучшенный) for (Last created unit) to (Level of Огненный столб(Улучшенный) for Blood Mage 0374 <gen>)
        • Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Human Blood Mage - Flame Strike (Position of (Last created unit))
        • Wait 0.01 seconds
        • Set Rast = (Rast + 100.00)
    • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units of type Dummy) and do (Unit - Add a 5.00 second Generic expiration timer to (Picked unit))
    • Set Rast = 100.00

• Astral
  • Events
    • Unit - Blood Mage 0374 <gen> Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Изгнание в астрал(Улучшенный)
  • Actions
    • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units within 800.00 of (Position of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>)) and do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Unit - Create 1 Dummy0 for (Owner of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>) at (Position of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>) facing Default building facing degrees
        • Unit - Set level of Изгнание в астрал(Улучшенный) for (Last created unit) to (Level of Изгнание в астрал(Улучшенный) for Blood Mage 0374 <gen>)
        • Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Human Blood Mage - Banish (Picked unit)
    • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units of type Dummy0) and do (Unit - Add a 5.00 second Generic expiration timer to (Picked unit))

• Soggenie MP
  • Events
    • Unit - Blood Mage 0374 <gen> Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Сожжени маны(Улучшенный)
  • Actions
    • Set point_MP = (Target point of ability being cast)
    • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units within 300.00 of point_MP) and do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Unit - Create 1 Dummy1 for (Owner of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>) at point_MP facing Default building facing degrees
        • Unit - Set level of Сожжение маны(Улучшенный) for (Last created unit) to (Level of Сожжени маны(Улучшенный) for Blood Mage 0374 <gen>)
        • Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Night Elf Demon Hunter - Mana Burn (Picked unit)
        • Wait 0.01 seconds
    • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units of type Dummy1) and do (Unit - Add a 5.00 second Generic expiration timer to (Picked unit))

• Phoenix
  • Events
    • Unit - Blood Mage 0374 <gen> Starts the effect of an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Феникс(Улучшенный)
  • Actions
    • Set Angle = (Facing of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>)
    • Set Point = ((Position of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>) offset by 256.00 towards Angle degrees)
    • Unit - Create 1 Dummy2 for (Owner of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>) at (Position of Blood Mage 0374 <gen>) facing Default building facing degrees
    • Special Effect - Create a special effect attached to the chest of (Last created unit) using Abilities\Spells\Other\Doom\DoomDeath.mdl
    • Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Orc Tauren Chieftain - Shockwave Point
    • Unit - Add a 5.00 second Generic expiration timer to (Last created unit)
    • Wait 2.00 seconds
    • Special Effect - Destroy (Last created special effect)

Ability names as you can see messes with the text transfer into the hive, eitherway you're leaking locations, while you set points to variables you don't destroy them, you're also leaking groups, take a look at some spell tutorials.

 

[Almia]

Lots of Waits,Leaks,Uses Event Units

 

[defskull]

Cool, might be handy, for him.

 

[zv27]

Even if the MUI, this is too simple.

 

[Almia]

Cool, might be handy, for him.

 

[mckill2009]

NEVER upload a spell that;
- uses <gen> coz its a generated global, means it's worse than a NOT MUI instance...
- use a wait specially in a looping instance...
- leak groups/locations and special effects...

Rated: -2/5 voting for rejection!

 

[Noobsmoke]

When I started spamming -> 10 FPS and my computer said : "Why the hack are you downloading all of these?"

 

[Almia]

never upload a spell that;
- uses <gen> coz its a generated global, means it's worse than a not mui instance...
- use a wait specially in a looping instance...
- leak groups/locations and special effects...

rated: -2/5 voting for rejection!

yeah -2/5

 

[EyeCandy]

looks like a rushed dodgy job! No offence but at least remove leaks even if it's that simple of a spell.

 

[Magtheridon96]

I don't want you to grate my Bloodmage :c
HE IS NOT CHEESE YOU KNOW ;_;
HE HAS FEELINGS TOO ;_;

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edit
You should use the general "A unit starts the effects of an ability" event for starters.
Then you should read this: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/triggers-scripts-269/things-leak-35124/
It will help you understand what is a leak.

 

[eubz]

You have to read tutorials before you upload things up. Please, feel free to visit the hive's tutorial section.

 

[Noobsmoke]

I'm tired of seeing these spells everytime i log on hiveworkshop and go to Spells section so I made some changes on it to be atleast approvable.