Ok I'll give you some adive
Triggers
• Maybe when the footman moves forward you should do the trigger "make unit face unit over x period of time" (in unit section of triggers)
• The camera should maybe zoom right into the footman when he says "I will," then zoom back out, as if he was very heroic or something
Sound
• Possibly make a clap sound or request it
Models
• I'm sure you could find a tomato on TheHive (If you have quetions about importing ask me or ask in the forums)
Terrain and doodads
• add terrain and doodads would look better
Nice attempt tho