Black Citadel

[Moderator]

09:58, 23rd Oct 2014
Orcnet: Same upload, please read abgm's review.

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

this is a multiupload, i now it, you uploaded this map the last year in 2013 and it wasnt approved

the map in epic war and the hive post are the proof

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/black-citadel-236068/ 06-10-2013, 01:43 PM

http://www.epicwar.com/maps/228953/

chasing you like old times

No multi-uploads of a single resource - please use

instead

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/rules-information-710/map-submission-rules-228244/

past ones are already rejeted whats the point?

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

the point is this is a multiupload and there is a rule against that

if i update rejected map it is still going to say rejected isn't it?

 

[Deleted member 238589]

The map seems rather simple. But, with a few improvements, I see no reason why it shouldn't be approved.

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

The map seems rather simple. But, with a few improvements, I see no reason why it shouldn't be approved.

Mabey you could point out what should be improved cuz i myself have no idea

 

[Deleted member 238589]

You should definitely try a bigger layout. It's too small for you to do anything major.

 

[Deleted member 238589]

@abgm: Yes, converting it to a 1v1 map is also an option.

You still have to solve that decor problem abgm mentioned.

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

Not to bust my fellow reviewers boat, but 96 vs 128+ map size argument is due more to preference. There are some maps that are great for rushing, others better to conserve and harvest recourses. Perhaps criticizing creep drops, doodad use, creep camp and neutral building placement, recourses spread throughout the map, and other things would help the creator fix his map if he did not want to radically change it.

 

[Orcnet]

It would be of best way to improve your map building skills is by looking at tutorials, playing skirmish maps, and understand the functions, doodads, and atmosphere of each map's theme.

This one is just an expendable to your previous altered melee map, you only removed the custom materials but the map's functionality is still there which is bad and needs dire work to be given a approval feedback.

Little tip, try to compare your map with one of blizzard's 4 player maps, trust me it enhance my visualization in mapping.