Black Citadel

[Moderator]

20:41, 8th Jun 2013
Orcnet: needs more stolen work

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

Rate & Comment
100% NOT mine

 

[Arrr]

100% NOT mine

That sarcasm..

Some tips(?)
Tavern should be free from monsters/reach-able without having to go trought creeps
Creeps between players (those in nort east south west) could be put a lil' bit in the woods
Mid in not symmetric (just aesthetics)

 

[UndeadImmortal]

Is this really yours now?

 

[Binsu]

Man, write the one who made this in the credits. Really, bro... and whats with the sarcasm tag!?

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

Man, write the one who made this in the credits. Really, bro... and whats with the sarcasm tag!?

i made this one
thats why it looks shitty

 

[Binsu]

^ I will try searching in the internet for clues. You know I cant still trust you with just words....

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

^ I will try searching in the internet for clues. You know I cant still trust you with just words....

Hope you find it ^^

EDIT: search on epicwar

 

[Da Fist]

The map has a few problems :

The way to the tavern is guarded. I find that unusual.
The G-camps are quite hard to Creep Jack from the AIs, considering there are O-camps guarding the way.
There are no other conquerable (except if you play 1v1 or 1v1v1) gold mines. It will be hard ( at least for me. Probably just me, since I suck at these. ) to gain enough gold to supply for the upcoming Low-High Upkeep wars.
Trees are quite scarce too.
The Doom Guards are a little too strong. They easily wiped out half of my troops.

Though I see some good points :
After one round against AI, I could easily out maneuver it by attacking both bridges simultaneously, flanking his troops.
The Goblin Merchant is well placed for a quick escape after a successful orange or red creep jack ( invul potion baby! ).


-Da Fist-

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

The map has a few problems :

The way to the tavern is guarded. I find that unusual.
The G-camps are quite hard to Creep Jack from the AIs, considering there are O-camps guarding the way.
There are no other conquerable (except if you play 1v1 or 1v1v1) gold mines. It will be hard ( at least for me. Probably just me, since I suck at these. ) to gain enough gold to supply for the upcoming Low-High Upkeep wars.
Trees are quite scarce too.
The Doom Guards are a little too strong. They easily wiped out half of my troops.

Though I see some good points :
After one round against AI, I could easily out maneuver it by attacking both bridges simultaneously, flanking his troops.
The Goblin Merchant is well placed for a quick escape after a successful orange or red creep jack ( invul potion baby! ).


-Da Fist-

Thanks for your opinion
None of the taverns are guarded actaully
only fountain in middle
do you say that doom guards come out when you get near tavern?

 

[Binsu]

Lol, no need bro for the returning part.

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

Changed some stuff
-Changed position of creeps betwen bases
-increased amout of gold on gold mines from 12500 to 50000
-changed color of water from black to red
-added weather

 

[THe Sandro]

Man i played this one
and it was pretty good and balanced well atleast for me

Why steal maps if you could make your own ones?
anyway good luck with your "None Stolen" maps

 

[gumba]

Man i played this one
and it was pretty good and balanced well atleast for me

Why steal maps if you could make your own ones?
anyway good luck with your "None Stolen" maps

I agree man
Looks like his on good path again
Since this one is really made by him
Good luck with your maps -SmaSHeR -

OFFTOPIC:why you changed name if i remember correctly its was GodS_SmaSHeR

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

Thanks guys
The name was changed becouse GodS_
is a clan just did not like it to be here

 

[takakenji]

hopefully u dont steal more maps again

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

if you dont steal maps anymore... i give you a second chance, now i am more calm.


nice map by the way, nice waterfalls and water use between the platforms.

Hah thanks
If not count the other maps(you know what i mean)
this is my first meele map

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

yes your first melee congratulation

you know after the crusade war between Richard Heart Lion and Saladin
when King Richard get seek with fever, his adversary, Salandin, send him fresh
water from the mountains and fresh fruit.
And in secret Saladin tried to Marry her sister with Richard to stop the war and make an alliance.

Is not a comparison of who is who, but interesting story isnt?

Ahha lol stroy
Anyway Added screenie

 

[Orcnet]

100% NOT mine

Ladies and gentlemen, the pleasure of a crocodile tears has shown.

Back on topic, main bases is a bit wide you could had increase more trees and tile variations to give more weight on each player's area, the creep camps is a bit overpowered its a 4v4, or a 1v1 map there should be more green than orange rather than this output, goblin merchants has no creep camps which is a bad idea.

Terrain needs to be your best friend, not some path blocker and stuff, the black citadel is basely-themed on chaos orc life style + wrecked/demon related objects but right now its looks like a piece of land with no meaning at all

Overall needs more work a 4v4 in that map size is not a good idea instead a 1v1 should suffice why? you forgot to add expansion sites.

 

[Map Designer]

ill see this later

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

ill see this later

it got rejected dont bother