-BerZeKeR- vs calex3

[-Berz-]

I was too tired yesterday to make a "WIP" so I did it today

And you people are evil xD

 

[krisserz]

Heh, looks cool

 

[calex3]

Here is Mine....

 

[-Berz-]

Ooo... Test

Edit:

Ok, you're so totally winning this :/

 

[kola]

haha.

 

[calex3]

haha.

What so funny? °~°
here is some rep for if u loose ur challenge .....you want to buy me?

 

[kola]

Berz comment

he looks so sad haha

here is some rep for if u loose ur challenge .....you want to buy me?

lol no. just giving some rep so if u looose, u wont have done a spell + loose rep.

''i wont sell my self'' haha

EDIT: i know >.<

EDIT: Testing ur spell.

 

[calex3]

Lol know just kidding xD

 

[krisserz]

@calex3
Wow, really nice spell

 

[calex3]

When do you post your spell BerZ

 

[kola]

ur spell is rly cool but what i dislike is that something the duration of it is like .50 sec and sometime is like 3 secs.

 

[-Berz-]

@Calex, when it's done

Tomorrow I guess. I'm still working on the "little" things.

 

[calex3]

ur spell is rly cool but what i dislike is that something the duration of it is like .50 sec and sometime is like 3 secs.

LOOOOOOLLLLLOOOOOLLLLL
It is channeling spell so if you move you will stop it....

 

[kola]

ohhh.

well i didnt know >.>

 

[-Berz-]

@kola, Hehe, happens

 

[kola]

i guess ur right

 

[RED BARON]

It is channeling spell so if you move you will stop it....

A nice spell - I rarely use ice spells in the few maps I am still working on, but this one stands a good shot of being included in some way..

Now we gotta see what BerZ comes up with.

 

[-Berz-]

Maybe Santa will surprise you today XD

Just final polishing up.

 

[krisserz]

Maybe Santa will surprise you today XD

Just final polishing up.

Heh, waiting ;p

 

[RED BARON]

Maybe Santa will surprise you today XD

Just final polishing up.

Uh - This is going to be good. Where is the Press when one need them

 

[-Berz-]

Frost Wrath

Frost Maiden blasts the area with a wave of frost that deals damage to every enemy unit in a range of effect. Frost explosion slightly knockbacks units effected by nova. Cold damage slows unit's attack and movement rate for a short amount of time. Level 1 - Deals 130 damage in Area of effect 180, knockabacks units and slows their attack and movement rate for 2 seconds. Level 2 - Deals 170 damage in Area of effect 220, knockabacks units and slows their attack and movement rate for 3 seconds. Level 3 - Deals 210 damage in Area of effect 260, knockabacks units and slows their attack and movement rate for 4 seconds.

 

[kola]

testing...

a lil review, can be usefull to fix little things some times :

+yeah, the special effect is rly good, not too much things going on at the same time, but just enough.

+not a spell that is doing too much things witch would make it useless for wc3 maps.

+good balancing between special effects and waht the spell is doing.

+knockback is perfectly done with the special effect. it doesnt push units too soon neither too late.

-im not sure but first cast is lagging. gotta retest to be sure.
ok, tested 2 times and yeah it lags at the first cast

-a bit similar to frost nova

Gj.

didnt check the triggers.

 

[-Berz-]

Can you see the animation? I have some problems with net failing... :/

 

[kola]

on the image up the description? if yes, yeah i see it. but its better in game cuz its less slow and less laggy.

 

[-Berz-]

Hmm... I does lag upon firs cast :/

I'll try to do something about it.

 

[kola]

ok, i didnt know what to do, so i did this and i know that u cant use it (in fact, i dont even know if u will like it too) cuz u alerady have 2 imported things in ur map. but it gave me some thing to do for like 15 mins

quality was better before upload. idk if i need ur permission to post it on hive but well, if u like it, i'll do. i dont want to post it now cuz its not the best icon too.

EDIT: oh and its supposed to reprensent the spell of calex

 

[RED BARON]

EDIT: Oh and its supposed to represent the spell of Calex

That was important to write.. at first I thought you intended it for BerZ and it had be rather confused.

Did you create it from a ingame shot of his spell and then added some stuff / edited it?

My main complain about it is the its not centered.. and somehow miss the flash effect which Calex spell have.

 

[kola]

Did you create it from a ingame shot of his spell and then added some stuff / edited it?

no i drew it. hmm, i didnt centered it because i wanted it to be like if it was in air.

and was is the flash effect? tried to make it close to the real spell but well. i just tested it 1 time

 

[RED BARON]

No I drew it. Hmm, I didn't center it because I wanted it to be like if it was in air.

And was is the flash effect? Tried to make it close to the real spell, but well I just tested it one time

Ahh, okay thought you meant to look at it from above.. and the flash effect was more meant like there weren't much of an "explosion feel" to it.

How goes the surprise BerZ?

 

[-Berz-]

click on page 5.

 

[RED BARON]

click on page 5.

Huh? I clicked it... nothing so far I could see.

 

[-Berz-]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/1422826-post71.html

 

[calex3]

Very nice spell BerZ .....It laggs on first cast....why don't you make preload of special effects like creating dumy somewhere on map and order him to cast this spell ??
It looks cool now i think I'll lose....

ok, i didnt know what to do, so i did this and i know that u cant use it (in fact, i dont even know if u will like it too) cuz u alerady have 2 imported things in ur map. but it gave me some thing to do for like 15 mins

quality was better before upload. idk if i need ur permission to post it on hive but well, if u like it, i'll do. i dont want to post it now cuz its not the best icon too.

EDIT: oh and its supposed to reprensent the spell of calex

I think it doesn't fit for my spell hmmmm and I allready have 2 imports ....maximum reached..

 

[-Berz-]

Yeah, I'll try that, give me a minute

Tried to:

Crate all dummy special effect
turn on/of KN trigger
created one caster to cast a spell

And still it lags upon first cast :/

Oh, and Paladon you can start

 

[calex3]

I found what you fucked up ....in first trigger where you create dummy you remove point leak before you create it at that point...
This one won't lagg I tried..

 

[-Berz-]

I found what you fucked up ....in first trigger where you create dummy you remove point leak before you create it at that point...
This one won't lagg I tried..

O M G, I'm a retard :/

Thanks for pointing that out

Updating in a minute (on page 5)

 

[calex3]

Ok then I'll update my too...UPDATED ...now it starts judging

 

[kola]

I think it doesn't fit for my spell hmmmm and I allready have 2 imports ....maximum reached..

yeah i know, i said it in my post. was jsut doing this for fun.

 

[RED BARON]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/1422826-post71.html

Ahh thanks - I somehow had gotten the idea of.. actually I have no idea what that idea was

Anyway good thing you could find and fix that leak.

Let the excitement begin!

 

[calex3]

Happy New Year!!!

 

[-Berz-]

Oh, god what year is it!? O_O
I think I was dead for a few hours.

Pala, pala, pala!

And happy new year to you too.

 

[RED BARON]

Oh, god what year is it!? O_O
I think I was dead for a few hours.

Pala, pala, pala!

And happy new year to you too.

Yea - Happy New Year. One of you should have made a spell with fireworks in it

 

[-Berz-]

I had imaginary fireworks in my head, day or two ago XD

 

[RED BARON]

I had imaginary fireworks in my head, day or two ago XD

So much that you didn't see the real stuff?

Anyway news from Paladon?

 

[Paladon]

Yup, i can start.

 

[-Berz-]

Even if I wanted to see some, I couldn't because i was on some hill in forest in the middle of nowhere, plus it was raining and there was fog. :/

I was wondering what happened to Pala, I hope he didn't passed out -_-

Edit:

Nice timing Pala XD

 

[RED BARON]

I was wondering what happened to Pala, I hope he didn't passed out -_-

Edit:

Nice timing Pala XD

Yea - He came on the cue

 

[Paladon]

This challenge is judged by Paladon.
The judging is based on the fact of judging a GUI challenge.
The efficiency related judging aspect is based on a scale for GUI coded comparisons.
This judging doesn't take further Jass compared efficiency except the necessary "leak" cleaning into account (for the reason stated above).

Judged are the aspects Coding, General Appearance, Creativity and Theme.

• Coding (10) includes efficiency, structure and consistence.
• General Appearance (10) includes optical and visual effects, tooltip, user-friendly appearance and the effect of the spell.
• Creativity (5) judges the originality brought into the spell as well as the uniqueness.
• Theme(5) compares the General Appearance with the given challenge theme.

Coding: 8/10
Generally fine triggering, quite and easily customizeable. Sadly, there's not much of a really advanced code visible except the knockback maybe. Everything else appears pretty basic. You've choosen to access unit instances using a group which is okay. One minor issue (still worth to be mentioned) is your "random real" when it comes to the special effects for the knockback - the effect is in fact randomed, i'd rather prefer a constant interval.

General Appearance: 5/10
Well, the spell pretty much consists out of an explosion. There are some novas stacked on each other at the very beginning, furthermore you've used a knockback which is just hardly compatible with "winter" or "frost". The tooltip was partially a bit messed up.

Creativity: 2/5
Actually not the most creative piece (honestly, an explosion??).

Theme: 4/5
Overall matching. Mentioned aspects, just as the knockback, should still be noticed.

Total: 19/30

Coding: 8/10
You've used the general indexing method, in contrast to your opponent, to access each instance which is a fine way as well.
Generally the triggering is alright and without further flaws worth being mentioned except your lack of a possibility to remove newly added events triggered by possibly dead units later on. Your spell is hard to customize for beginners, but that's no aspect to judge harsh about in a challenge.

General Appearance: 9/10
The optical appearance is quite appealing and looks creative. The spell is actually giving the feeling of an advanced technique. The further effect is alright.

Creativity: 4/5
Quite creative execution, although the classical "frost explosion" is rather old.

Theme: 4/5
Matches the theme in general, although it may match a windy/rocky theme even better (consider other effects).

Total: 25/30

Congratulations.

 

[-Berz-]

Well your review is a bit odd, since the "theme" is eye candy spell. But ok, I had fun and that's pretty much what it matter so me

calex, congratz, I hope you enjoyed this as much as I did

 

[RED BARON]

Congratulation Calex

Would it be wrong to wish you better luck for next time BerZ?