Barren Canyon

[Celaquil]

So, this will be my third terrain, tried to make this desert/mountain feel over it, with this geyser in the middle.

 

[Parkietje]

it screams for fog, not the ground fog thingy. And the black shadow in the right is ugly. Nice try though, like the use of blizzard cliffs. Also why the hell is there a sun? it's night right?! And try to cover up the back a little more nicer

 

[Oziris]

The water is weird..

 

[Nudl9]

Kind of like it, but maybe you should change background sky.

 

[I)eadnerzhul]

Yeah, the sky doesn't match. I like it, it gives me a sort of futuristic picture of a battle between the Zerg, Protoss, and Terran.

 

[~Void~]

How you did the geyser is very nice.

 

[Celaquil]

haha, right, so the night thingie i did notice right now xD Its suppost to be day, ill fix that later, and there is fog, but maybe it should be stronger? As you dont see much of it except the background, and ill cover up the black part, as soon as i get some time, i will fix all the issues.

Oh, and whats wrong with the sky? Considering its suppost to be day, its a fine suny day, anything wrong with that? And, please, if you dont see any else issues than the ones mentioned, then dont post untill i get it updated.

Update: Added a new pic, hope its better

 

[I)eadnerzhul]

Er... double post? Yeah, it looks MUCH better with a different sky, but I still get that alien "feel" I was talking about earlier.

 

[Celaquil]

heh, is that a bad thing?

 

[I)eadnerzhul]

Double posts? Oh yeah. Just use the edit button.

 

[Nudl9]

The new one looks very nice, gj!
+rep!

 

[I)eadnerzhul]

Oh yeah, that reminds me...
+Reputation, your terrain reminds me of the good old days of Starcraft.

 

[Celaquil]

What i ment, Nerzhul, was if it was a bad thing that it looked Starcraftish Since you mentioned "but I still get that alien "feel" I was talking about earlier."

Sounds like something bad in the way you said it, but i suppose its a good thing? right?

 

[Hawkwing]

It dosen't look like Barrens, more like Thousand Neetles, which has lots of those geysers. But Thousand Neetles is basically southern Barrens.

This is awsome.

+rep!

 

[Celaquil]

The title states "Barren" doesn't it? Witch i believe is English and is a short word for wasteland, am i right? So, its not basically barrens, could be anywhere there is short on living conditions

And I'm glad you like it

 

[Parkietje]

maybe remove the waves?

 

[Celaquil]

On the water? Why? and how?

 

[Parkietje]

On the water?

Yes

Why?

Looks better on that shallow river, and I think it makes it all look nicer IMO.

how?

Scenario > Map Options > uncheck the Show Waves boxes.

 

[Celaquil]

Update: Removed the waves

 

[roflmao]

love it.