Azeroth Burns

[Moderator]

13:59, 16th Jun 2008
Septimus:

Bad Point

[-] Terrain too plain
[-] Terrain seem weird (Especially the dirt area) since I notice most of the dirt area look too smooth
[-] Seem like almost no effort had been given to create this map
[-] Position of those creep seem awful (Should put those creep guarding a gold mine or their base (Something like tent))
[-] Position of Player 4 (Purple) base ain't that good, creep at the opposite of the gold mine (Infernal Juggernaut) would attack worker that harvesting lumber from it.
[-] Amount of tree seem to be too less.
[-] Amount of gold seem to be too less.

Overall - 1/5
Rejected

Comment : More effort should be put especially when it comes to melee map. Making melee map is the most easiest compare to other map type, but to get a good rating/support require a good work in terraining, position of creep and many other else concept should be consider.

 

[Septimus]

Bad Point

[-] Terrain too plain
[-] Terrain seem weird (Especially the dirt area) since I notice most of the dirt area look too smooth
[-] Seem like almost no effort had been given to create this map
[-] Position of those creep seem awful (Should put those creep guarding a gold mine or their base (Something like tent))
[-] Position of Player 4 (Purple) base ain't that good, creep at the opposite of the gold mine (Infernal Juggernaut) would attack worker that harvesting lumber from it.
[-] Amount of tree seem to be too less.
[-] Amount of gold seem to be too less.

Overall - 1/5
Rejected

Comment : More effort should be put especially when it comes to melee map. Making melee map is the most easiest compare to other map type, but to get a good rating/support require a good work in terraining, position of creep and many other else concept should be consider.

Tips : Look into all those melee map design by users that had high rating and blizzard map. You would notice how much effort had been put into it.

Note : Don't feel offend by this review, anyway you ask for it. I was trying to help you. Good luck in map making ^^

 

[ChildeRoland]

Thank you for the review, I'll update the map when I have time some time. And I agree, the creeps are acctually pretty strange placed.

 

[Ravager]

It's not bad....but its not good either. It really does need alot more effort. Try harder and update this to make it great!

 

[ChildeRoland]

thanks for feedback, I'll try to update it regulary

 

[Huurka]

Like said before: Too plain. Make hills and stuffs.

Also how can dirt burn?

 

[ChildeRoland]

ok, in the first update I'll add some Black citadel/outland or dungeon tiles, remove/move some creeps, set places for the creeps to defend (tents/caves etc), and make it a more variable terrain.