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[Moderator]

14:58, 7th Jun 2008
Pyritie: Not a bad start... I have a bunch of suggestions though. (1) Instead of particles, use ribbons. Or at least fix the particles' alpha and don't make them float upwards. (2) Instead of just a blue ball for the nucleus, what about protons/neutrons? (3) The nucleus and electrons are pretty high-poly at the moment.

Fix these and I'll approve it.

13th Jun 2008
Pyritie: MUCH better.

 

[Dark Hunter1357]

I will make an icon soon.

 

[The_Silent]

What are you supposed to used for, som strange item, a spell or somthing else?

 

[Dark Hunter1357]

Can be used in a map as an tech item(gives you upgrades or something)

 

[The_Silent]

Okay, an other thing, i don't even think that atom exist, i mean 3 electrones in the other shell?

 

[Dark Hunter1357]

There is no need to be a real one.

 

[BanananaHead]

It looks very good i belive

 

[Someguy19]

I like it, very nice idea. +Rep if I could.

 

[qqluqq]

The size of the nucleus and the electrons are greatly exagurated, considering this is a scale model with the right distances.

 

[donut3.5]

Billboarded planes ftw... Use them.
--donut3.5--

 

[Karouk]

Make a quark next! Dey time travel!

 

[The Red Wizard]

This is just lol

 

[Anything.]

That's a really unstable atom
Carbon-0 +6, haha.

Didn't we learn that electrons move in clouds now?
Anyways, those electrons are much too large compared to the nucleic particles.

This is brings a smile to my day. But the day's almost over. Should have found this first. Drat.

 

[Gammelkebab]

maybe you could make the particles as own model to make us able to choose how much particles we want (skill: Sphere)

 

[MGCǂSpectre]

Awesome representation of the atom, Not only does it show the protons in the nucleus but also shows electrons orbiting as in the electron shells. Nice job, 5/5 and I will use it. Use it when studying Chemistry 101

 

[syltman]

Should be much much much smaller but 5/5 for brilliant idea

 

[JetFangInferno]

Again, use billboarded planes to reduce the file size by like 9001%

 

[Anything.]

Awesome representation of the atom, Not only does it show the protons in the nucleus but also shows electrons orbiting as in the electron shells. Nice job, 5/5 and I will use it. Use it when studying Chemistry 101

Someone needs to review their chemistry
Nuclei can't stay together without Neutrons and Electrons are 1800 times smaller than Protons!

 

[cHeRoL]

I think there is an icon.

 

[Dark Hunter1357]

You must be wrong or i didn't made it

 

[Insaniac69]

Hmm.. Like many others lately, a very "different" model. But still very useful. But I suggest fixing your nucleus so that there is an even # of protons and neutrons. (Looks more basic) Maybe change the color so you can tell the difference between the protons and neutrons. And as a final detail, shrink your electrons to mere specks but add like 20 more. >.>

 

[Dark Hunter1357]

I'm thinking of making the electrons a bit smaller and the protons and neutrons bigger

 

[Draeneruf]

00000000000000000000000000000000000000

 

[~Void~]

Pros:

Original. VERY original.
Did I mention original?
It works.

Cons:

That bubble thing... is very ugly!
No neutrons D:

4/5.

 

[Kazuga]

Looks lovely.

Offtopic: I was wondering if you could make a chemistry glass, you know a test tube. Have searched around here and I'm surprised no one has made/submitted one.

 

[Hades7.ger]

Cool^^ What a about Particle accelerator )

 

[Zhall]

I know exactly what to use it for!!!

Atomic research! This is absolutely perfect for my map +rep.

 

[Triax]

Would be pretty if there were traces (is that the right word?) behind the electrons. Or are there? 'Cause I see them on the screenshot but not with War3 Model Editor.

 

[Maximum_Evil]

looks awesome, but I dont think this kinda usefull