Ashenvale River

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

An Ashenvale forest.The sky is full of stars and the area seems quiet that night.

 

[Supermj]

The back wall seems rather... jerked up. If your going to have something that straight up... it should be rocky tiles to seem like a cliff. Other than that, I like it alot.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Thanks.I didn't want to make it a cliff though.

 

[Pyritie]

But things don't just jut up out of the ground like that. Just stick on a rockyish tile, or add some rocks at the bottom.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

You are right.I will put some rocks on the bottom of the river and use some rocky terrain.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

This is okay but could be improved greatly and overall just seems too random.

Why have you putted a palm tree there for an example, that makes no sense!

You have used 6-7 different tree models in this tiny area and they don't blend in well together.

Tilevariation is good and you used different shrubbery very well. You could have made the river banks better but they are all right besides from the back where it goes upwards out of nowhere, it does not look good with such a sudden stop.

 

[Gilles]

You have floating doodads. Fix it quick!

Looks playable, I'm guessing it's not, but it could be.

 

[Blackveiled]

Could be alot better, I suggest more environmental doodads, and some rocks under the giant hill ;P

 

[Belgarath]

Yeah, rocks, and different trees. And don't put palm trees into FORESTS ...

 

[Gilles]

Haha, I didn't notice the weird variation in trees. Definitely take out the palms. I suggest you keep it to one genre of tree. Pine for example.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Hehe..sorry for palm tress you are right.I will try to find some time to work on it.

EDIT:Updated the picture.Removed Palm Tree and put some more grasses.

 

[Supermj]

Better, though you could make the walls more rocky.

 

[Gilles]

Better. But you have pointy ridges. Smooth it! I agree supermj, you could raise the rock tile up 1 unit higher.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Yes too pointy ridges. Smooth that out and add some rocks and river rushes or grass in the river where the hill starts, that might improve it and make it look less empty.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Ok,I will update it maybe.I like it right now though..