Armored_Demoness

[Moderator]

10:23, 30th Nov 2012
-Grendel: a good edit of the demoness model. its very useful too. approved!

 

[eubz]

Give Comments. Please.

 

[JesusHipster]

This screenshot is just awfull, but i somehow love this edit. Nice idea with armor, that consists of both bloodelf and warden textures, good job.

 

[Uncle Fester]

it's a pretty nice rig-up, but i do have 3 suggestions:
1) make a seperate portrait file for her. A portrait where she talks would be better fitting for an organic unit, IMO.
2) the facemask on her chin could use a little fix in the skinning. On the cheeks, the golden strip between the facemask and cheek is more visible. On the front-part of the face it's lesser visible, except from close view.
3) the shield's height should maybe be lowered a little bit. In a few anims, it looks like the one top corner would sting her neck or, like in the Stand Ready anim, the shoulder pad goes through the shield.

My suggestions are just minor issues, rather perfectionising than essential. It looks pretty good without them as well.

 

[InfernalTater]

This is really cool, and the file size is really nice and low for such a model. I'm giving it a 4/5.

 

[rcshaggy]

Its a nice addition to the female demons. :3

 

[eubz]

it's a pretty nice rig-up, but i do have 3 suggestions:
1) make a seperate portrait file for her. A portrait where she talks would be better fitting for an organic unit, IMO.
2) the facemask on her chin could use a little fix in the skinning. On the cheeks, the golden strip between the facemask and cheek is more visible. On the front-part of the face it's lesser visible, except from close view.
3) the shield's height should maybe be lowered a little bit. In a few anims, it looks like the one top corner would sting her neck or, like in the Stand Ready anim, the shoulder pad goes through the shield.

My suggestions are just minor issues, rather perfectionising than essential. It looks pretty good without them as well.

Well, I like these suggestions preferably the third one.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Nice, but shoulders are a bit too tiny, imo.
Also u could add some wings!

 

[-Grendel]

nah, she needs ears. lol
its really awesome and useful too but like what the others said, fix the jaw armor and add a talking portrait. after that i'll approve.

 

[eubz]

Fixed some issues: Giving the model a Portrait Talk animation.

 

[Mgeterno11]

Looks much better that the blizzard one.Like the shield, and the colors. 5/5

 

[doomhammer99]

Cool

 

[Uncle Fester]

Well, I like these suggestions preferably the third one.

always a pleasure to give suggestions about improvement

 

[EbonyStallion]

It's a cool edit.
You could remove the two tris coming out of the top of her thighs, which just go inwards towards her ovaries.

 

[Zzonehardy]

The mouthguard kind of looks like a choker... for those of you who don't know what that is... don't find out... I would suggest having it go flat instead of a triangle type shape, if it is like a mask maybe have more curved ends near the ears, just a suggestion...

Anyways good model, useful variation of succubus for a demon or legion race

 

[deepstrasz]

Interesting. You could do more concepts like this one.
4/5.

EDIT: well that spell slam would do better without the fire FX. And, a Footman Defend animation wouldn't hurt but that's optional.