Ancient Sandlord

[Vinz]

The animated texture usage is commendable. The weapon ribbons are a nice touch, and so is the jackal sitting. I like the subtle tail particles in Spell.

The model's highlight is the death/dissipate animation combo. It's satisfying to watch the model turn to sand.

Good job!

 

[Barorque]

Oh man great model, this makes me want to play some Tomb Kings on TW-WH2!

 

[Null]

I'm no expert, but that dog's face could use a better texture, I would also like more attack and animations, this way it will remain interesting in game.
You can't change this now, but even if your model is super cool and well-made (as it is great job!) it might not get popular due to the lack of scenarios in which it will appear. After a brief research I've found out that only about 60 maps have a theme in which your model could fit.
I would love to use some skeletal nercromancer on a skeletal hound, but I'll have to add some egiptian theme. You could make a modifyed more neutral model (just saying).
Great job! 4 stars.

 

[Loki18]

ooooh tomb kings
this one is cool glad u made this thanks

 

[Valexto]

A very clean model for me, i like it a lot. Can be pretty useful for ancient maps

 

[Maximal]

I'm no expert, but that dog's face could use a better texture, I would also like more attack and animations, this way it will remain interesting in game.
You can't change this now, but even if your model is super cool and well-made (as it is great job!) it might not get popular due to the lack of scenarios in which it will appear. After a brief research I've found out that only about 60 maps have a theme in which your model could fit.
I would love to use some skeletal nercromancer on a skeletal hound, but I'll have to add some egiptian theme. You could make a modifyed more neutral model (just saying).
Great job! 4 stars.

I could, after the contest ends, right now I wanna focus on perfecting this one, thanks for the feedback.

 

[Misha]

hey, this is very cool :3 very thematic and animations are nicely thought out. However.. the anims seem slow, without timing, and could use some speedup at certain points, like the swing, or windup to it. a wind-down is what the slow part of the anim should be. granted war3 is mostly quick attacks, but there is still some speed-up and slowdown that you should try doing

 

[Maximal]

hey, this is very cool :3 very thematic and animations are nicely thought out. However.. the anims seem slow, without timing, and could use some speedup at certain points, like the swing, or windup to it. a wind-down is what the slow part of the anim should be. granted war3 is mostly quick attacks, but there is still some speed-up and slowdown that you should try doing

Could you point, what in particular caught your attention?

 

[BoatyMcBoatface300]

Could you point, what in particular caught your attention?

Probably something like this. I think this video can explain it better than I can type here, with graphics and all.

You could even consider acting out the animations yourself to see how it might look.
It really helps, even if it might look silly in the process.

Edit:
Hope this might help.

And I really like the death animation. It's something I've been thinking about how to do, but I haven't thought of a way. Until now.
Very creative on that.
So good job

 

[Misha]

Could you point, what in particular caught your attention?

well, the attack anims, but this is a small issue. Also, i see Boaty has linked a very nice explanation

 

[Palette]

Damn, good job making this. Looks like a well-made model in my opinion especially how the effects are special for this.

 

[matin45]

Amazing model for me atleast, just I think it should have a walk animation (not run).

 

[Wayshan]

This is absolutely brilliant! Magnificent animation and brilliant execution texture-wise! Thank you so much for sharing

 

[Maximal]

Gonna fully remake the walk animation + add a slow walk for those who want it.

 

[deepstrasz]

Amazing model for me atleast, just I think it should have a walk animation (not run).

It has a Walk Alternate animation.

 

[Maximal]

It has a Walk Alternate animation.

I've added it after his message

 

[matin45]

I've added it after his message

So I think there is no reason to don't give you a 5/5. Great job and goodluck in contest.

 

[deepstrasz]

I've added it after his message

@matin45 excuse me

 

[matin45]

@matin45 excuse me

Thats nothing man, these things happen.

 

[knight26]

Useful for a lot of maps!

 

[Opex]

Thanks for the model file. I used it for Journey Through Twisted Meadows and added a special in game thanks to Maximal. Nice model 5 stars

 

[Null]

Attack 3...

 

[General Frank]

Please fix the collision shapes of the model to encompass the whole model.

 

[Maximal]

Please fix the collision shapes of the model to encompass the whole model.

Fixed the collision boxes, should be fine now.

 

[General Frank]

Fixed the collision boxes, should be fine now.

They aren't.

 

[Maximal]

They aren't.

For some reason the bundle didn't get updated, now it should be fixed

 

[General Frank]

An interesting idea and good execution.
Works in-game and performs well.

 

[Resyak]

A simply great model, one of my favorites and I had not seen it until now.

 

[KaiZen7th]

Oh! You can be mine! jajaja