Anachrons christmas gift

[Anachron]

.. is a poem from me every day until 26th of dec.
Enjoy!

18.12

Your love
Another day is passing by,
another night you stand alone,
wouldn't you be that damn shy,
and would go to your phone.

She asked you to call,
but all you did was nothing at all,
you just have her number,
you just accidentally fall.

Now you are alone again,
feeling that lonely pain,
giving up with love at all,
as suddenly the phone has a call.

You took it surprised so fast,
the guy who called talks like in haste,
he said to you you should know something,
that you were her lovely king.

Now she killed herself this night,
taking to the heaven the next flight,
shes waiting for you to come,

will you leave for her your lovely home?

Hope you like it^^

 

[Krl70]

I think i saw some youtube clip containing almost the same content... Sad story...

 

[Anachron]

What? Where? Who the hell took my poem?

 

[Krl70]

"Story that makes you crie." Or something in that neigbourhood... Tough, if i rememer correctly, i didn't start to cry... The content is almost the same, but not in the form of a poem tough...

 

[Anachron]

This is not a story, these are poems about my life.

 

[Krl70]

Sad stuff anyway...
Anyhow, I like the poem, it's sad, and carries meaning, the question at the end adds a little spice.

For anyone experiencing such a situation, i would recommend
This Flash Game
Or even better, consult someone... It's supposed to help!

But seriously, i hope that is some of the methaphoric stuff i don't seem to understand, if not, good luck moving on.

 

[Lambdadelta]

On the first day of Christmas my true love gave to me...

 

[Hugget Sukker]

Thank you, Anachron. I understand your poem is about my love. It's named: "Your Love", so that must be for me, the reader. Again, thanks for the present.

 

[Fussiler1]

On the first day of Christmas my true love gave to me...

One drunk Dwarf and a gnome on a pine tree.

On the second day of Christmas my true love gave to me...


Good poem, man.

 

[Anachron]

19.12

Another day
Another day is passing by,
I have seen her again but were to shy,
to talk to her at least 1 time,
but how else could I call her mine?

To be that shy isn't easy at all,
but because you never have anyone to love you can't fall,
but today you get an early call,
you were surprised, who might it be?

The phone at end say: "Hey, it's me!"
who can that be?
I remember that lovely voice,
the girl just used,
is that my choice?

I shouldn't be that confused again,
because then it might be over,
because I wanna a love like Barby and Ken,
but then I would be a fu**ing cover?

So late this night she invited me,
to go to her to watch DvD,
we had so much fun that evening,
theres so much wonderful at her you should see,
a lovely dress from chest to knee.

And this is how the story ends,
will we be just friends?

 

[Anachron]

20.12

Life
Being alive could be the greatest thing,
but I really think,
that my life fucked up somehow,
pain and disappointing is everything what it does show,
you just feel how something cuts into your life,
its more a soul pain then a knife,
but the knife seems to realize,
to increase greatly the size,
of how much you feel of your life,
everything you wished was a good wife,
maybe having some money to spend,
but now you can't defend,
can't defend against yourself,
its like someone waited for you in stealth,
waiting for the moment to kill you,
crying is the only thing you do.

Its nothing more then love we always need,
but who gets love and not all the common shit,
its like feeling into an desaster,
but it won't stop its like a channeled caster,
repeating everytime you see yourself in a mirror,
or with every step you do outside the door.

Don't be ashamed to cry,
it's better as to be to shy,
but anyway everything you might need,
is to remember you are not the only person, indeed!

 

[Chizume]

Am listening to the same songs as I listened to when my gf broke up with me (a long long time ago) as I read. It still gives a rush though

 

[88WaRCraFT3]

i can't call this great, cause it's about your life, but your poems are great

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

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