Abandoned Troll Ruins

[Mr.Jamaka2]

i lil something i wipped up after 6 hours of WoW

 

[Wraithwynd]

Nice.

I'm uncertain about the grass/weeds on the steps in the second image. Its hard to tell if they are growing between cracks in the rocks or not.

That is due to the position and angle of the camera. Perhaps move the camera or reduce the weeds to the sides of the steps. ?

Also I noticed that the sky was pitch black....

Are these ruins inhabited? I would say yes simply because there is a fire burning. Perhaps it is best if we run along before who ever is living there returns.....

 

[Mr.Jamaka2]

heh well the fire is a flesh and skull fire so it burns forever aparently and the angle is messing with how the weeds grew. but yes it "was" inhabited but they died by some...toxic...fire air or somthing...

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Oh,i don't know why but that screenies KICKED ass!!

 

[Mr.Jamaka2]

heh thx

 

[Gilles]

Pretty darn good! Although as wraith said, put a sky, and I see flat land all around the area, I would terrain more of it.

 

[Craka_J]

Reminds me of that annoying troll village Zul'Kunda or something like that in the Hinterlands. The one that's like an instance but it isn't... god I hate that place.

Well it's very well done. Details and tile-variation are very good and although the fog is good, it kinda throws me off. It's too yellow. And there's no sky! *gasp* I thought you'd learn by now!
I also hate seeing the ground going through the center of the steps. Fix that.
~Craka_J

 

[Mr.Jamaka2]

the ground through the steps is on purpose (showing decay twards use of them) and i didnt have the sky showing on these cause my brain when dead when i watched something right before i took the screens i'll fix it if you want me to. and also Zul"Kunda is where i got it from, nice eye Craka =D

 

[Gilles]

I would suggest using something other then normal ground to show decay. Did you try any other fogs? I think you should try one with a bit more green in it.

 

[Craka_J]

I agree with Gilles that the fog should be either more green or a light gray.
~Craka_J

 

[Mr.Jamaka2]

ok well i fixed them (i hope theres not too much fog)

 

[Gilles]

The fog still needs work. Try Craka's idea with a grayish.

It looks pretty awesome other than that. I love the new areas!

 

[Mr.Jamaka2]

i'll put a few up with a grayish fog i tried it but it didnt just give the same "pazaz" as the goldish one

 

[Craka_J]

Much better. I think the green fog goes a bit better. And the light fog should either be more dense or a darker gray.
~Craka_J

 

[Mor)L(unE]

Looks Very Good!

 

[EatShrooms]

Wow that looks great. Lots of green, I dunno, maybe a little too much green? Your call.

 

[Oziris]

I love it u are good keep the good working on.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Don't put too much fog it will ruin it.

 

[Rui]

Fairly decent. You used the Ultimate Terraining Map? However, I think you made a bad choice of tiles for the idea.

 

[Craka_J]

It's great but it's still missing something... I think there isn't enough detail outside of the focal point of this terrain. That may be the case.
~Craka_J

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

I think it's quite completed.

 

[Craka_J]

Yeah. I think it's safe enough to say it's done. Now for your next piece!
~Craka_J

 

[Gilles]

Yeah the gray sure didn't turn out. I liked the yellow the most I think, maybe a medium between the green and yellow? Ahh whatever, as Craka said, next!

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

I think it's time i shall start a new terrain too...

 

[~Void~]

The green fog makes me want to vomit. Make it darker green or put more blue in it. But otherwise, you really surprised me with this one. Really nice layout.

 

[Mr.Jamaka2]

heh i'm waiting for a new topic to come to me (WoW isnt helping much) but it'll come to me and it shall be better!

 

[Craka_J]

~Void~ has a good suggestion. The fog should be darker. Then you can move to next piece. ^_^
~Craka_J

 

[Mr.Jamaka2]

hah ok i'll make the greenish yellow one darker

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Ok,waiting for the new picture.

 

[Mr.Jamaka2]

my terraining has been put on hold... due to me being grounded for failing math so the next one should be ready in a week or 2

 

[Gilles]

Ouch, math.... Hope you get it done ASAP!

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

They look great to me, but the fog seems a little to thick..

 

[Mr.Jamaka2]

well i have been let go early i think and i have started my next peice but it is 3/4ths done... soooo it should be ready by 3 days...?

 

[Just_Spectating]

mmm.., green..,

 

[Mr.Jamaka2]

i may be taking a short intermission in my terraining due to no ideas but when i think of somting it will be good

 

[MadseN]

Take your time and let the inspiration come to you. It always have a tendency to turn to shit if your force it out of you, or at least it does so for me hehe

/MadseN