A sad poem about my pet.

[lord_ken]

When is it time to say goodbye?

To all the love i know?

When is it time to accept your death?

And my broken heart?

I need your warmth as does my heart.

When is it time to neglect the pain that all you have given?

I have felt the share of pain you have experienced.

I see a light. But it leads to pain.

I need your warmth as does my heart.

When do i have to endure this pain?

I just want you back and nothing else.

If only you were here... My precious puppy.

Critiques and Feedbacks needed.

 

[Tyranid]

Buy a new puppy.

 

[lord_ken]

Do you think its that easy? He was so cute. But lets stay on-topic.

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

Buy a new puppy.

... Well I like the text color

 

[lord_ken]

Come on! Lets stay on-topic here people? Feedbacks! Critiques! Like those! Gah.

 

[Okunevic]

I truly feel sorry for your loss ;]

Tyranid , not everyone is a emotionless loveless person without any feelings like you

 

[lord_ken]

Erm.. people.. ITS A GOD DAMN POEM!!
BTW

Critiques and Feedback please!

 

[Tyranid]

I truly feel sorry for your loss ;]

Tyranid , not everyone is a emotionless loveless person without any feelings like you

How am I emotionless? I was just giving some useful advice.

 

[Huurka]

He... was a puppy????


That is sad......

 

[lord_ken]

Please. STAY ON-TOPIC!!

 

[Tyranid]

Please. STAY ON-TOPIC!!

Not until I see you FWOOSH some faces, Richard!

 

[Ghost765]

*clap clap clap*

"I see a light. But it leads to pain."
does this mean YOU are dying?

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

No.. It tells about emo who fears sunlight lol

 

[Huurka]

You're joking in a sad thread. Not nice, tbh.

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

Sorry, but poems about dead animals are just too cliché for my taste :/

 

[Huurka]

Then leave it be.

 

[lord_ken]

Really? lord_ken incinerates and decapitates Tyranid. IS THAT ENOUGH FOR YOU YOUR MAJESTY?!?!

 

[pyropk95]

speaking of staying on-topic rofl ^^^^^

 

[pyropk95]

ya i was talking to someone else ty very much

 

[MySpaceBarBroke]

There seems to be a boom in poems posted in the Off-Topic section. While this isn't necessarily that grave of a crime, for future reference, please post your poems in the Screenwriting, Storyboarding & Concept Creation section.

~ Thread Moved

And just to contribute to the thread, it's a nice poem, despite being a little blunt.

 

[Vicboy]

Reminds me of my 3 year old dog...

You should let a puppy live longer, not damn kill it in it's youth...