Battleground

[Moderator]

18:34, 31st Dec 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

Incorrect type, incomplete description, empty terrain.

 

[RedClaw]

some screens plz?

 

[Pourquoi]

Author name?
Here's a list of BB Codes for you to improve the description. It currently tells us nothing. Add information about neutral buildings, creep camps, and some screenies to attract people.

 

[Jay the Editor]

To EternalWow2010 : err.. screen huh?.. Just a simple melee map .. I duno where I shud take a shot..
To chimto : Author name? wat means? btw, tis is my first map n tis is juz a simple melee map.. it's jz full of resources..

 

[Wanza]

Nice *_*
I like melee maps too
+rep

 

[warner]

@Jay: Screenshots are for people to take a look at the terrain without downloading it. Afer DLing it, it seems pretty good for a first map. You should update your description first, or it won't get approved.

 

[Eldubs]

Take a look at my maps description. They have a screenshot of overview. Also people like terrain pictures : )

 

[ap0calypse]

• Creep Respawn
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Dies
  • Conditions
    • ((Triggering unit) belongs to an ally of Player 2 (Blue)) Equal to True
    • (Custom value of (Triggering unit)) Greater than 0
  • Actions
    • Wait 80.00 seconds
    • Unit - Create 1 (Unit-type of (Triggering unit)) for Neutral Hostile at Creep_Point[(Custom value of (Triggering unit))] facing (Facing of (Triggering unit)) degrees
    • Unit - Set the custom value of (Last created unit) to (Custom value of (Triggering unit))

That's not how melee-maps work...
You also increased the HP of the trees, so it's an ALTERED melee.

Either way: there are no drops, there are not enough creeps (yes, they respawn... I know) ans the terrain is mostly empty.

For an altered melee-map it just isn't good enough (nor for a melee-map).

 

[Jay the Editor]

To warner : but the terrain is just a simple one .. taking a screenshot may makes it looks worst..
To eldubs : err.. i juz nt gud in my english .. it's pretty hard for me to describe sumthg
To ap0calypse : sry.. tis map shud altered melee .. i increases the tree hp bcoz i wan to make this map to have unlimited resources..

To all: Thanks everyone. I'll try to improve each and every of my mistake. It take some time; facing exam soon.. =P Thank you very much! ^^

 

[ap0calypse]

No problem, good luck with your exam ^^

And you can ask someone for a description next time, that could always help.